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Published: 2004-04-14 16:32:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 261; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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You take me in your armsYou tell me everything will be alright
That you love me
You kiss my neck
Your lips are sugar to my mouth
You hold me close
All my fears and doubts vanish like vapor of the night
I love you
Before I never knew i could feel this emotion
I did not believe in the "L" word
Now I know though, that as long as I have you,
I have love
We fall asleep together on the warm grass
Your steady breathing makes calms me
You whisper to me under the stars
You make me smile like no other
Before I was petrified of love
I did not believe it existed
But here i am now
I am in love
With you
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Comments: 8
tranquil-sky [2004-04-14 19:55:24 +0000 UTC]
See..I told you!! This poem is awesome!! Exception job!! Keep up this type of writing!!
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painedlove In reply to tranquil-sky [2004-04-15 01:44:45 +0000 UTC]
aw..really? i wasnt sure if i liked it all that much...thank u!! xox
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tranquil-sky In reply to painedlove [2004-04-15 04:26:35 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!!...It may take some practice, but it get's easier. Trust me.
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yamiyugi [2004-04-14 16:38:43 +0000 UTC]
*You should write poems like this more often, etc.
Sorry, I forgot a word.
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painedlove In reply to yamiyugi [2004-04-15 01:46:36 +0000 UTC]
whahhaah! ah, ur cute!! lol..xox
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yamiyugi [2004-04-14 16:37:44 +0000 UTC]
Awwwww!!!! Thats the sweetest poem I have ever read! It makes you feel all warm and fuzzy inside. You should poems like this more often, but you're awesome at any style of poetry. Awesome work!
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painedlove In reply to yamiyugi [2004-04-15 01:45:41 +0000 UTC]
cheers!! im glad u liked it!! hehe/........i wasnt sure how good it was.........I LOVE YOU!! xox
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