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I would like to say hello to you,from all that is me,
to all that is you.
i donβt want to sit below your view,
and pretend that I donβt care.
i walked out of your house,
down your driveway,
i looked up at the stars,
and every last one of them was there.
i would like to kiss your brain,
and have it whisper in my ear.
you are my barreling tractor trailer,
and i am your wide-eyed deer.
i walked out of your house,
down your driveway,
i looked up at the stars,
and every last one of them was there.
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Yes, this is song-like as well, The meloncholic wanting, I hate it when you want someone to support your feelings with theirs, I hate depending on others.
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ahh! someone who understands this poem. thank you very much.
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Wow, wonderful work! This poem is just perfect . . . it's romantic and pretty yet it has a sense of humour to it, which all too often poetry here lacks. My favorite line has to be "you are my barreling tractor trailer/and i am your wide-eyed deer". It's hilarious yet it's not just bizarre, it has a meaning I can understand. Quite a feat.
Worthy of great song lyrics!
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fantastic work man, you're descriptions are simply beautiful, and the last line really pulls it all together.
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