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Published: 2012-12-22 19:01:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 369; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 5
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Description My work here is done. *Noms on popcorn*

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The first - [link]
The second - [link]

Have I improved? ouo
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Approximately 14 frames.
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Comments: 33

CactusFruits [2012-12-31 03:05:09 +0000 UTC]

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STELLA DON'T ASK TO ME TO CRITIQUE THIS AHHH.

WELL. There's not much for me to critique really. The anatomy looks good and the animation is JUST PLAIN AMAZING.

How the tail swishes in just looks amazing. I love that fluffy little tail.

But. When the cycle get to the yellow frame it looks a little jumpy, but I think its because of the color not the actual frame. Hope that made sense. *facedesk*

Stella I suck a critiquing bro. Sorry this isn't the best help, but I just can't find anything you need to improve on really.

Unless your going for realism. Then study that anatomy man. Like the face is a bit cartoon looking. But you get the point.

Amazing job bro ^-^

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pandoq In reply to CactusFruits [2012-12-31 03:13:31 +0000 UTC]

I was not going for realistic on her face, don't worry xDD
Yis I love her tail <33 ;u;

I gotta fix that yellow frame :U

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shadowstripe01 [2013-02-04 04:17:22 +0000 UTC]

Stellllllaaaaaa!!!!! This is epic!!! I really need to go through my inbox again DX as soon as I cleaned it, it was full again!!! I wantz to see morez of your artwork and improvements!!!!

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Alaricat [2013-01-07 02:44:17 +0000 UTC]

Ya you improved but *Rubs eyes* eyes no like flashing bright colors.

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pandoq In reply to Alaricat [2013-01-07 03:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Yeah ;^^

I just love rainbow cycles x33

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stellasaurassock [2013-01-01 17:59:26 +0000 UTC]

stunning! great work on the tail!

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pandoq In reply to stellasaurassock [2013-01-01 21:50:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! ^^ <33

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stellasaurassock In reply to pandoq [2013-01-01 22:03:26 +0000 UTC]

np!

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pandoq In reply to stellasaurassock [2013-01-01 22:05:13 +0000 UTC]

^^

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ratrascal [2012-12-31 13:14:38 +0000 UTC]

I just spent the past two minutes staring at this it's so beautiful <333

bro if you opened commissions for this and I had any points left I would so buy one eue

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pandoq In reply to ratrascal [2012-12-31 22:14:01 +0000 UTC]

I really have to make a commission sheet ;u;

Thank yoooouu ahh <33

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CactusFruits [2012-12-31 02:46:50 +0000 UTC]

STILL SO AMAZING

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pandoq In reply to CactusFruits [2012-12-31 02:56:03 +0000 UTC]

Critique iiiiiiiitttt ;u;

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CactusFruits In reply to pandoq [2012-12-31 03:05:29 +0000 UTC]

ffffine

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pandoq In reply to CactusFruits [2012-12-31 03:15:28 +0000 UTC]

Yay ouo

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Talidaga-Montrega [2012-12-27 21:10:30 +0000 UTC]

way cool

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pandoq In reply to Talidaga-Montrega [2012-12-31 03:15:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you v//v

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CheenBeans [2012-12-23 02:18:44 +0000 UTC]

So cute <3

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pandoq In reply to CheenBeans [2012-12-23 02:37:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you v//v <33

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CactusFruits [2012-12-22 21:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Holly shiz. Bro this is just amazing.

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pandoq In reply to CactusFruits [2012-12-22 21:54:35 +0000 UTC]

Omf thank you v//v

I still think the first one is the best though o3o
//Lolno xDD

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CactusFruits In reply to pandoq [2012-12-22 22:16:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh foreal girl XD

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pandoq In reply to CactusFruits [2012-12-22 22:20:18 +0000 UTC]

Totally xDD

It beats this one by like, 413 landslides |D

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pandoq [2012-12-22 19:02:50 +0000 UTC]

And so are dA descriptions >:I


I can't have more than 10 frames if I want it animated. D:<

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R3llO In reply to pandoq [2012-12-22 19:05:49 +0000 UTC]

And what will it do if you try to add a new frame in photoshop?

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pandoq In reply to R3llO [2012-12-22 19:12:24 +0000 UTC]

It says that I have to either reduce the file size or the number of layers. I tried reducing the file size but that didn't work >:c

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R3llO In reply to pandoq [2012-12-22 19:28:18 +0000 UTC]

What version of Photoshop are you using? (CS3 etc)
Cause I did all of my pervious animations on Photoshop CS3 at around 1000x1000 pixel box and they turned out fine, including one that was 35+ frames.

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pandoq In reply to R3llO [2012-12-22 19:41:10 +0000 UTC]

It's actually PS Elements 9 :I

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R3llO In reply to pandoq [2012-12-22 19:49:14 +0000 UTC]

That might be your problem then, try looking up "PS Element 9 animation problem" that might help.

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pandoq In reply to R3llO [2012-12-22 20:00:05 +0000 UTC]

Nope :c

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R3llO In reply to pandoq [2012-12-22 20:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Aww well I'm sorry : / I'll ask my Commercial arts teacher and see if he has any advice (when I get back to school).
Maybe try saving this one as a GIF then copy the last frame past it into a new document and finish it in the other and then mash them together in Iaza.com or Jasc? That's all I can really can think of.

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pandoq In reply to R3llO [2012-12-22 20:16:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah that could work!!

Thanks!! :33

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R3llO In reply to pandoq [2012-12-22 20:27:03 +0000 UTC]

No problem : D

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