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PandoraU — Hunter part 7

Published: 2009-01-10 17:22:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 573; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 15
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Description Two weeks. It took me two weeks to find this girl and as I'm getting ready to leave Miami, she finds me. We talk for a little bit and it takes me awhile to get over her accent. At first I think it's French but after about thirty minutes, I'm pretty damn sure it's French Canadian.

Her name is Chriss, and this girl has mad skills at the tender age of 21. Reminds me of the kid Andy recruited awhile back, like all this crap just comes so naturally to them. I'm pretty sure I had her ready to sign until I mention who'll she'll be working for. The first mention of Pandora and she's up out of her seat. I tried to reel her back in but she won't budge and then my cellphone rings, I look down to get it and by the time I look up, she's gone.

You'd think finding a girl with a purple streak in her hair wouldn't be too hard to find, oh well. I answer my phone while looking through the crowd and listen carefully to the voice on the other end. The news hits me like a rock. I thought we had time, I thought we were making things right, we were so close....

My phone drops to the ground and I follow it, my knees slam hard on the concrete and the sharp pain reminds me that I'm not dreaming God I wish I was dreaming. He's dead, Hunter Jackson, me ex husband is dead...and his murderer is Hentai Noir...I got work to do.


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Comments: 4

redfeatherraven [2009-01-13 03:27:13 +0000 UTC]

plot twist wut wut?

lessee how this goes.

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DarkNightGraphX [2009-01-11 00:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Awesome suspence there...i did not see his death coming

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WrenchMan [2009-01-10 19:35:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh man! Your killing You first hunter off? Where is this plot twist gonna go.

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almeidap In reply to WrenchMan [2009-01-11 00:52:46 +0000 UTC]

he was created to die. So the reader knows the story is about Hunter's in the Pandora U, and not just this one, but I had to give his personality some depth.

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