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Published: 2013-06-05 13:30:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 4696; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 16
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A little scene me and wrote of Tara Strong getting hungry whilst voicing Twilight in MLP. Specifically, the episode where Twi rumbles constantly.
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*looks at this really old drawing* .....ok I agree
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Nah, this pic is terrible XD
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So you mean to tell me the sounds of Twilight Sparkle's stomach actually came from Tara Strong's own stomach? Talk about being the character!
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any possibility of going back to this redrawing it? fixing it up?
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Alrighty. On behalf of TummyCrit, here's my analysis :3
I'm not a MLP fan at all, so I'll leave the subject matter out of it, but there's nothing wrong with a nice stuffing pic, and the scenario is unique enough.
The first panel is nicely done. The pose, expression, and gurgle are all great, and I don't have any real issues with it. This is probably too much to ask for a sketch, but some more little details on the floor or walls would have helped, though lack of them doesn't hurt the piece.
The second panel is the one I'm going to focus on because, as I see it, you need to work on perspective a bit. The table looks lopsided, especially with one leg looking significantly longer than the other two, which makes it look like it's sloping. This isn't a protip, but with perspective, try to have horizontal lines at relatively the same angle. The table doesn't match up with the walls or the chair, and it looks out of place as a result.
Tara herself has an amusing expression, and I love the tongue lolling out x3
But I'm just not sure about her arm. The position is doable, but I don't think her elbow is defined well enough, making the position look a bit disjointed. I also have no idea what she's gripping and how she's gripping it
The belly. It's nice, can't complain~ the navel in particular is nicely shaped and very fitting, and the belly itself interacts well with her legs. The way her shirt stretches on the other hand isn't convincing to me. Either it's a really stretchy shirt or those buttons should be flying across the room at the speed of Dashie (oh look, a naive MLP joke ;3 ). The dialogue is great but... I can't read some of it. I won't say that's a big issue since I'm terrible at writing neatly, but maybe try to print a little clearer if you can.
Sorry if that all sounded too negative, but I hope it helps! Nice work c:
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Heheh. Well, it's my fault, I kinda rushed it a bit. Honestly, I hate her face in the first panel. As for the shirt, the pic was just too busy to add flying buttons. Believe me, I absolutely would have otherwise. ;3
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So where's that link to the chan posting of Colin's story?
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what? NO i would never do that
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sorry......and you weren't suppose to know about it......
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Also, what's the logic in him not being allowed to tell people his work was stolen? That's like saying someone who gets robbed should be punished for telling he police.
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i just happened to be on that site looking at EqG hate art when i came across it......there happy?
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Why'd you refuse to link it to him?
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i deleted it after i was done and didn't think to copy it
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ill remember for next time
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Then how'd Colin find out?
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but anyway i like the picture....allthoe the episode your refuring to is my fav but you now made it awkward for me
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A lot of Colin's things do >w>
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ok still.....its a bit funny
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