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Hi peeps! Have a new page.
Surama's little rant here gave me nice headache with its translation, but I hope there aren't too many typos or grammar errors.
Oi, hei, Anne, en välttämättä saa mahdutettua tätä osaa siihen 62:een sivuun, saattaa mennä parilla sivulla yli. Toivottavasti ei haittaa pahasti. (Jos taittoon jää ylijäämäsivuja, niin voin katsoa niihin jotain sitten, jos jää häiritsemään.)
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In the bottom corner you can see Iacar sat with his head bowed, The tree has a skull on it (Nightclaw, his mate's skull) and the little beads suspended by ropes on the lowest branches (5 in all) represent their dead puppies.
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Thank you for clearing that up.
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Guess somebody is getting to know what Hell Hounds are really like, eh?
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If Nightclaw died of birth, then I'm assuming that her puppies died too?
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- I love Surama's little speech x3 Great job.
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Joten, Nightclaw (miten hänen nimensä suomennetaan?) kuoli synnytykseen. Mietityttää vain, miten pennulle (vain pennuille?) kävi.
Aika huvittavaa, miten sana 'narttu' olisi muuten melko loukkaava ilmaisu, mutta nyt kun on koirat kyseessä...
Ja vielä yksi kysymys. 'Rampa' on lempinimi, niinhän? Entä nimet kuten Näpsänenä tai Vääräleuka? Ovatko nekin lempinimiä?
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Huh, interesting custom they have for funerals...
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I like the page, especially the way you draw skulls! I have a few suggestions to make the dialogue clearer though, if you don't mind~
Does that help your translation at all?
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Thank yous!
About the pregnant bitch line, Pyramos showed them a female hound who was pregnant. The situation can be seen in this page: [link]
"Presented them with our territory" was a hard line for me to translate. Surama is supposed to say in a sarcastic tone how Iacar gave their territory as a present to the neighbor pack ("in a silver platter" kinda way, except that I can't use the frase because the hounds don't know silver and they don't use plates either).
But thanks for the translation help! I'll probably try to fix them at some point later when I have more time (didn't save the editable file, lalalala...)
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Pregnant bitch makes sense then xD If Surama's line is sarcastic, "handed over our territory" might work... That is a hard one though.
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The "presented with our territory" thing came off exactly how you intended I think, since that's how I read it.
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"died of birth" a better translation might be "died giving birth" (mother died during birth process)
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So what happened to Icaar's puppies? He and Nightclaw were not deepblooded.
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It could just be a disease or a complication, and it could be that the combination of their mutations caused one that did a bad number on the puppies.
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Actually the grammars done just fine.
I guessed Nightclaw died giving birth, that's really sad.
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I might just be reading something wrong, but when it says "our own lacar" I think it should be "our own leader"
Otherwise it is great as always:}
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This brings an interesting question: can he cry? Does he have tear thingies (can't think of the word) on his tongue, or where his eyes should be?
I think you translated this rather well, especially considering how difficult English can be even to native speakers.
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wait wait wait...so Nightclaw was Iacar's mom?
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Nightclaw was Iacar's mate.... I'm guessing she died due to a difficult pregnancy.
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Oh that makes sence...
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I think this work is pretty amazing, so original. Your translations are spot on, except for one of the bottom panels, where I think maybe 'died of birth' could be 'died during birth'? Tell me if i'm wrong, please
Meanwhile, I see no problem with the artwork, I think it's fantastic! I'm thrilled and excited for the next page.
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yay new page
For me, Morris body seems too big in the first panel considering the size of his head. Also I don't really get the meaning of the last panel :S
Otherwise everything is as great as it always is
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I'm a little confused as to where the skulls are coming from... are they in the bushes or something?
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The skulls are from the three bodies they found a few strips back. They put them in an ant hill so the ants would clean the skulls.
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Its not 100% clear what they are saying to me. I think there may be some wording that's off :3
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"showed us a pregnant bitch and" That's probably more funny than it was meant to be XD
I'm not really in my right mind at the moment and I kind of tend to notice different things at these times, such as: no branches on the trees all around and there are these three with conveniently level branches--just wow...
Sorry.
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They could be pine trees, most pines don't have very many low branches. The low branches are rather convenient, but it's possible that the dogs simply snapped off some of the lower branches to the right length.
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You might want to change "died of birth" to "died during birth" - flows a little better, makes a little more sense. Otherwise, it all makes sense to me!
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That implies she died being born. I'd say "died giving birth," is better.
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Yeah, I agree. "Left a mark" is a bit awkward too, but I'm not sure what to suggest. Scarred him? Left an impression? IDK!
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I've heard it said, "That event left a mark" in this context in my dialect of American English, It may sound odd to other people.
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Good point, I was basically thinking "died during child birth"... I just didnt think about the child/pup part.
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"Died giving birth" ??
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Ha! First to comment!
What's he wiping?
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First comment fail.. sorry!
I think hes wiping his nose.
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This was my first time- and I wasn't expecting it... I was like. o3o I'm speshul. x] But don't worry, you'll get it one day!!
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I thought I got it too, till I hit F5
Gotta be fast to get it though, I guess
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Fourth to comment. x] And I think Iralbe is wiping away tears, but I could be wrong...
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Wait, there was a pregnant wolf? I don't remember this, just guys arguing about "get out".
And Irable's paw sfx might want to read "swipe" instead of "wipe". x) Wipe has conotations for cleaning with paper towels and stuff while swipe is more thought of to be a paw moving quickly.
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At first I was confused as well, but I reread the comic and I was going over for any plotlines I could have possibly missed, and see in this page: [link] In the 8th panel, there is a pregnant wolf (The one with the spike-things along her neck) And Iacar's (presuming mate) Died during birth, so they didnt need the caves any longer, while the pack leader, Pyramos, needed it for the pregnant wolf.
I hope I explained it well enough for you to understand, because its kinda complicated I guess.
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Ah, thanks for clearing that up! I think it is a bit too....vague or inferred for me to have remembered it well, but that's her choice in writing it.
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The "pregnant bitch" is in reference to the conversation between Iacar and Pyramos. I think it went something like:
Iacar: "Why do you want our land? You weren't interested in den caves when they parceled it out."
Pyramos: "Well, you don't need it. I have a pregnant female in my pack, her mate's dead."
Iacar: "Oh. Right."
*vague suspicion that her puppies might be Pyramos's, even though he's deepblooded.*
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Ah! Alright, I got caught off guard by the "showed" part. I was thinking through all the characters and pictures I'd seen because I expected it to have been more than just a quick dialogue spot.
Yes, that does sound like it might be his....doesn't seem like we'll find out though. If they are that's gotta be some drama when they're born.
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