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Published: 2004-06-08 15:46:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description rhythm starts us waking
to a new night and

we breathe together
we breathe together
we breath as one, and joining into one,
one ever changing creature

we change together
we change together
we change as one and we remember,
and remembering together, we are alive

we remember
we remember
we breathe
we change
we are alive
we are divine

the circle is complete
and changing, and as
we are
sewn together
bound together
we remeber
we are alive
we are divine
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parallaxian - kris-a fix
Comments: 4

Invisigoth100 [2004-06-21 10:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow - well done!
Nat x

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parallaxian In reply to Invisigoth100 [2004-06-22 14:15:00 +0000 UTC]

ty

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fullonemptiness [2004-06-10 07:30:35 +0000 UTC]

it's not easy to make a piece that uses repetition a good read, but you have done, you keep the reader interested throughout with the natural progression of the changing of the cycle, nicely written.

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parallaxian In reply to fullonemptiness [2004-06-12 02:53:25 +0000 UTC]

ty...glad i could do it

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