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the chilling flame says:you remind me of a bullet...
i once knew..
a girl...
staring into an empty
bottle full of answers,
the chilling flame keeps seeking love in kitten's cradle
look at her. she seems content with life and fire in a ladle
she slings about and pours it out.
the chilling flame just takes the pain and calls her name.
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Comments: 8
parallaxian [2004-10-27 21:05:25 +0000 UTC]
mas·och·ism ( P ) Pronunciation Key (ms-kzm)
n.
The deriving of sexual gratification, or the tendency to derive sexual gratification, from being physically or emotionally abused.
The deriving of pleasure, or the tendency to derive pleasure, from being humiliated or mistreated, either by another or by oneself.
A willingness or tendency to subject oneself to unpleasant or trying experiences.
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Invisigoth100 In reply to parallaxian [2005-01-19 15:41:46 +0000 UTC]
Ah... I'm not that quick he he
I loved this I think it sounds like a fragment from a play or something... Have you read and Richard Forman? Sound a tad like some of his work...
all in all, tis amasing
Nat x
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parallaxian In reply to Invisigoth100 [2005-01-19 17:24:09 +0000 UTC]
haven't read anything of the sort...
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Invisigoth100 [2004-10-22 10:09:53 +0000 UTC]
Since I don't know what masochistic means I really don't understand this poem... er... care to elaborate for me?... then I'll read it again
Nat x
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inferis [2004-10-20 23:02:31 +0000 UTC]
I like it, and I was there when it was written, I can feel it.
Well done, Para of Llaxian.
-Inferis
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Fragile-Forlorn [2004-10-20 12:51:43 +0000 UTC]
Interesting arrangment of words.
"staring into an empty
bottle full of answers"
... An amusing puzzle this line.
Most unusual but you managed to paint the scene.
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parallaxian In reply to Fragile-Forlorn [2004-10-20 22:27:53 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the comment.
i wasn't really myself while this was being written. very emotional evening. really, i don't know what to think of it.
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Fragile-Forlorn In reply to parallaxian [2004-10-20 22:32:04 +0000 UTC]
...Sometimes the best things happen when we step out of ourselves for a different view
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