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Published: 2004-06-29 14:15:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 123; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 56
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what have i found? beneath my feet a door....and so i kneel to brush away the sand, and
i descend a spiral stairwell to a path that's
paved with words and images: the path of shadows.
i begin to believe. i begin to conceive, and now
i know "this" is my paradise. though dark and lonely,
i see much more clearly here, and i embrace with
closed eyes and open arms what some call insanity.
i breathe. i change. i remember. i am.
there is a door that you must close your eyes to see.
there is a door, and on the other side i'll be
it opens when you ask of it
it opens when you're free
i have come to shed the pathe behind
a dirty dig, a worthy find,
a hidden door, a silenced light.
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Comments: 3
fullonemptiness [2004-06-30 19:40:31 +0000 UTC]
This feels very Vast-like (the band 'Vast' that is), it flows really nicely and the rhymes are well placed, the whole thing works excellently.
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parallaxian In reply to fullonemptiness [2004-07-03 23:26:06 +0000 UTC]
never listened to vast, but perhaps i will now. thanks for the comment, and i will urge you to read the complete tome of shadows...
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