HOME | DD
Published: 2004-06-04 20:41:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
Redirect to original
Description
i walk upon the lonely path of shadows,and as the darkness grows
my vision sharpens
i see beyond horizons from
this cantage point i've found
my vision sharpens
and as i look around, i know i can't be seen
and so i turn my back to walk beside a memory.
'cuz it's all that i can do to communicate to you
without words which would betray, what it is i have to say
when i stop, i stand upon the edge of all i know, and
from the peer of counciousness i can hear the sirens calling.
so i walk the lonely path of shadows,
and as the darkness grows
my vision sharpens
and as my vision sharpens,
i peer withing your heart.
don't mind the gash i carve
into this vantage point i've found.
Related content
Comments: 6
fullonemptiness [2004-06-06 16:24:59 +0000 UTC]
This is really good, I like the focal points of your writings, there's always an over-riding theme that's present and the words are all in-keeping with that theme.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
parallaxian In reply to fullonemptiness [2004-06-08 14:08:37 +0000 UTC]
...and the theme is especially prevalant in this piece. the melody that i am working on is rather dissonant too. i can't wait til i can record the tome of shadows with inferis...
thanks for the read...i'll be a better deviant now i'm in town.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Invisigoth100 [2004-06-06 13:48:44 +0000 UTC]
Isn't it weird how you can somehow see better in the dark!
This is wonderful!
Nat xxx
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
parallaxian In reply to Invisigoth100 [2004-06-08 14:09:38 +0000 UTC]
darkness is a wonderful metaphor when used correctly...it's not necessarily a bad thing...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1