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Published: 2004-03-29 08:56:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 20
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Description the deep trench of my transgressions
visited me one night as i nodded off the peer of conciousness
for so long i thought i was asail,
but i was swimming deeper,
and when i heard the music calling i...

i said to my ghastly guest i guess you'll
do as you wish with me and i will listen for a change
and the silent water's singing deafened me,
and i was swimming deeper,
and when i heard the music calling i...

when i heard the music calling i could only breathe
and then i screamed
purify me
purify me
purify me

the bubbles showed me the error of my ways
and i saw that it was damn sure time for me to change
for so long i thought i was asail
but i was swimming deeper
and when i saw a piercing ray of light i...

so when i hear the sirens calling i'll remember that
when i heard the music calling i could only breathe
and then i screamed
purify me
purify me
purify me
and then i saw a piercing ray of light
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Comments: 14

Fragile-Forlorn [2004-04-10 12:19:41 +0000 UTC]

Very entertaining reading for an intoxicated mind
I like this, its my guess that i will forget it and have to reread it soonish.
You express yourself very differently, your own unique style.
My eyes peel above the words.

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fullonemptiness [2004-03-30 19:02:16 +0000 UTC]

S'good, infact it's very good, a bit different which is always a good thing. I think a lot of us can relate...

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parallaxian In reply to fullonemptiness [2004-04-03 08:28:14 +0000 UTC]

i find myself searching for new things. i hope that less people can directly relate, but i have my doubts.

relate all u want, but realize the results....promethius...epimethius...lol ...u decide which is better.

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fullonemptiness In reply to parallaxian [2004-04-03 08:42:09 +0000 UTC]

I think we all like to think people can see what we mean, without them relating *too* much

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parallaxian In reply to fullonemptiness [2004-04-03 08:44:14 +0000 UTC]

lol...it's really for their own good that i hope this...really.

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fullonemptiness In reply to parallaxian [2004-04-03 08:46:53 +0000 UTC]

Aye, I know what you mean there

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klaarn [2004-03-30 02:17:27 +0000 UTC]

i like it.

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parallaxian In reply to klaarn [2004-04-03 08:30:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you...

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Invisigoth100 [2004-03-29 09:30:42 +0000 UTC]

ooooh!
Nat xxx

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parallaxian In reply to Invisigoth100 [2004-03-29 10:12:16 +0000 UTC]

aaaah!
lol...

glad you like it...just wrote it. im still collecting my own thoughts about it

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anima-et-aeris [2004-03-29 09:05:17 +0000 UTC]

This is so different from your other works- much more straightforward, but still containing the depth to glean insight from.

We're all searching for purity aren't we?

I love the imagery, you have led me on a journey that opens my eyes too. Thank you for sharing it.

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parallaxian In reply to anima-et-aeris [2004-03-29 10:15:17 +0000 UTC]

"is well aquanted with vice"...

that's good. we'll see how it all plays out.

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anima-et-aeris In reply to parallaxian [2004-03-29 10:30:28 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps the change will allow you to explore virtue?

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parallaxian In reply to anima-et-aeris [2004-04-03 08:32:04 +0000 UTC]

"...perhaps, perhaps, perrrrr haps?"

-k.m.

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