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ParalyticProcess — Abstract Romance [NSFW]
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Published: 2015-04-16 23:44:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 277; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description I am wet like grass covered in a morning dew
  and you are the fog that hangs around my head
         never allowing the sun to break through
         you prevent me from drying.

Yet I am grateful for such silent blessings.

In a perfect world
    you would be a colorful, exotic fish
    I would be a large, curvaceous bowl
       and you would swim inside of me
       until all of my water splashed onto the table
               and you choke on air.
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Comments: 7

DeiSophia [2015-04-25 21:52:10 +0000 UTC]

A stray from your normal imagery, until the last two verses. Nice to see

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ParalyticProcess In reply to DeiSophia [2015-04-27 17:21:12 +0000 UTC]

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DragonsChest [2015-04-17 18:34:12 +0000 UTC]

The ending caught me by surprise yet still a wonderful poem...

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ParalyticProcess In reply to DragonsChest [2015-04-20 17:24:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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DragonsChest In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-04-20 17:49:03 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome...

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maxnort [2015-04-17 12:16:31 +0000 UTC]

ooo! I like the flourish of images in the last verse.

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ParalyticProcess In reply to maxnort [2015-04-17 18:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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