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Published: 2015-04-16 23:44:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 277; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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I am wet like grass covered in a morning dewand you are the fog that hangs around my head
never allowing the sun to break through
you prevent me from drying.
Yet I am grateful for such silent blessings.
In a perfect world
you would be a colorful, exotic fish
I would be a large, curvaceous bowl
and you would swim inside of me
until all of my water splashed onto the table
and you choke on air.
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Comments: 7
DeiSophia [2015-04-25 21:52:10 +0000 UTC]
A stray from your normal imagery, until the last two verses. Nice to see
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DragonsChest [2015-04-17 18:34:12 +0000 UTC]
The ending caught me by surprise yet still a wonderful poem...
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DragonsChest In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-04-20 17:49:03 +0000 UTC]
You are most welcome...
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maxnort [2015-04-17 12:16:31 +0000 UTC]
ooo! I like the flourish of images in the last verse.
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