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Published: 2015-03-28 22:59:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 937; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Description I am no Judas
  but I can break bread with the best of them.

Invisible is your leash
               until it is convenient to hang me o’er the branch
               my intestines putrid, bursting forth
               your silver tongue
                        dashed upon the rocks below.

I only wanted to belong.

-D.E.M
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Comments: 10

DragonsChest [2015-03-30 19:07:28 +0000 UTC]

Powerful stuff... 

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ParalyticProcess In reply to DragonsChest [2015-03-30 19:39:11 +0000 UTC]

Some people don't mind sacrificing others for their own gain.

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WheresAJacket [2015-03-29 05:08:37 +0000 UTC]

I can where this going at very nice work.

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ParalyticProcess In reply to WheresAJacket [2015-03-29 05:18:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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WheresAJacket In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-03-29 05:20:36 +0000 UTC]

I did

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oviedomedina [2015-03-29 02:09:36 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic!
Specially:
Invisible is your leash
               until it is convenient to hang me o’er the branch
               my intestines putrid, bursting forth
               your silver tongue
                        dashed upon the rocks below.

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ParalyticProcess In reply to oviedomedina [2015-03-29 02:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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oviedomedina In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-03-29 02:34:19 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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maxnort [2015-03-28 23:23:54 +0000 UTC]

ok, so I can understand, what's the background for this collection?  I have an idea, but want to make sure.

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ParalyticProcess In reply to maxnort [2015-03-29 00:08:28 +0000 UTC]

Memories, more or less.

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