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Published: 2015-03-31 23:01:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 872; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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You ripped me from my mother.I was but a gnat, wholly insignificant
a fly, caught in your web of displeasure
but even then
I knew how cruel this world can be.
You were a jealous god
coveting, the gnashing of teeth
your apologies inconsequential
my voice too crippled to rise and
meet them.
But in this betrayal I am faithful
licking the back of your throat
until I sleep with the red fern
roots deep in bone
birds above me
mother beneath me.
-D.E.M
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Comments: 17
ParalyticProcess In reply to Smiteacount [2015-04-05 14:03:35 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you got it!
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comatose-comet [2015-04-03 14:49:17 +0000 UTC]
I think I have just fallen in love with your writing wonderful, you have a beautiful gallery
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ParalyticProcess In reply to comatose-comet [2015-04-03 18:19:24 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad I could help you fall in love! Thank you!
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ViPOP [2015-04-03 04:58:19 +0000 UTC]
<3 just wrote something on cruel worlds and I feel your piece much more than I want to at the moment TT_TT I love the first line btw. It feels incredibly strong and catches u by the throat
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ParalyticProcess In reply to ViPOP [2015-04-03 14:36:25 +0000 UTC]
I saw your poem floating in my news feed, I just need to read it!
And thank you; I try to start with strong words and finish with strong words.
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ParalyticProcess In reply to RoseScarlet [2015-04-02 23:12:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your encouragement!
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RoseScarlet In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-04-02 23:17:07 +0000 UTC]
It was the truth <3
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xandermartin98 [2015-04-02 03:09:15 +0000 UTC]
For a second I thought you had broken the fourth wall and inserted Deviantart's "Drag and Collect" button into the poem...but it turns out it was actually just a glitch XD
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ParalyticProcess In reply to xandermartin98 [2015-04-02 03:18:33 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I'll leave breaking fourth walls to Deadpool!
CHIMICHANGA!
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ParalyticProcess In reply to WheresAJacket [2015-04-01 01:04:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your encouragement! It means a lot to me.
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WheresAJacket In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-04-01 04:24:17 +0000 UTC]
I hope it helps keep up the work your doing.
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