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ParalyticProcess — Dogsong
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Published: 2015-03-31 23:01:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 872; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Description You ripped me from my mother.

I was but a gnat, wholly insignificant
                a fly, caught in your web of displeasure
                but even then
                I knew how cruel this world can be.

You were a jealous god
      coveting, the gnashing of teeth
                       your apologies inconsequential
                       my voice too crippled to rise and
                       meet them.

But in this betrayal I am faithful
      licking the back of your throat
      until I sleep with the red fern
               roots deep in bone
               birds above me
               mother beneath me.

-D.E.M
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Comments: 17

Smiteacount [2015-04-05 12:14:36 +0000 UTC]

Nice reference  

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ParalyticProcess In reply to Smiteacount [2015-04-05 14:03:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you got it!

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comatose-comet [2015-04-03 14:49:17 +0000 UTC]

I think I have just fallen in love with your writing wonderful, you have a beautiful gallery

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ParalyticProcess In reply to comatose-comet [2015-04-03 18:19:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad I could help you fall in love! Thank you!

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comatose-comet In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-04-05 05:51:13 +0000 UTC]

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ViPOP [2015-04-03 04:58:19 +0000 UTC]

<3 just wrote something on cruel worlds and I feel your piece much more than I want to at the moment TT_TT I love the first line btw. It feels incredibly strong and catches u by the throat

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ParalyticProcess In reply to ViPOP [2015-04-03 14:36:25 +0000 UTC]

I saw your poem floating in my news feed, I just need to read it!
And thank you; I try to start with strong words and finish with strong words.

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RoseScarlet [2015-04-02 23:06:41 +0000 UTC]

That was beautiful.

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ParalyticProcess In reply to RoseScarlet [2015-04-02 23:12:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your encouragement!

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RoseScarlet In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-04-02 23:17:07 +0000 UTC]

It was the truth <3

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xandermartin98 [2015-04-02 03:09:15 +0000 UTC]

For a second I thought you had broken the fourth wall and inserted Deviantart's "Drag and Collect" button into the poem...but it turns out it was actually just a glitch XD

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ParalyticProcess In reply to xandermartin98 [2015-04-02 03:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I'll leave breaking fourth walls to Deadpool!

CHIMICHANGA!

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Dysprosium162 [2015-04-01 02:08:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow!  Simply amazing work here!

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ParalyticProcess In reply to Dysprosium162 [2015-04-01 02:15:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3

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WheresAJacket [2015-04-01 00:39:37 +0000 UTC]

nice job this was great to read.

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ParalyticProcess In reply to WheresAJacket [2015-04-01 01:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your encouragement! It means a lot to me.

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WheresAJacket In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-04-01 04:24:17 +0000 UTC]

I hope it helps keep up the work your doing.

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