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ParalyticProcess — You, Martin
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Published: 2015-03-29 00:41:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 294; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description You, Martin
        with your tubes for hands
                 disease for breath
        you never lack words
               when I lack righteousness

But your soft slippers, perfect for long treks
                                        on your endless mountain
        hum gently that old lullaby that spiders sing to their young
                 and that penny I dropped in your eye
                         I never saw again.

Oh, you, Martin
      you laid down upon the splintered tracks
             when I just became old enough
                        to board the train.
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Comments: 11

DragonsChest [2015-03-30 19:06:45 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful poetry... 

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ParalyticProcess In reply to DragonsChest [2015-03-30 19:39:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! That means a lot to me.

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DragonsChest In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-03-31 16:59:03 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome...

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BloodlustStephi [2015-03-29 20:00:42 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful

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ParalyticProcess In reply to BloodlustStephi [2015-03-29 20:08:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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BloodlustStephi In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-03-29 20:09:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Dysprosium162 [2015-03-29 14:18:35 +0000 UTC]

Lovely piece!

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ParalyticProcess In reply to Dysprosium162 [2015-03-29 14:36:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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WheresAJacket [2015-03-29 05:07:31 +0000 UTC]

you have some good work.

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ParalyticProcess In reply to WheresAJacket [2015-03-29 05:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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WheresAJacket In reply to ParalyticProcess [2015-03-29 05:20:47 +0000 UTC]

your welcome.

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