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paramoon — another song?
Published: 2012-11-08 20:50:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Verse 1 Hey there it's been a whilehaven't seen you're face
haven't seen you're smile.
Well I suppose
it didn't end well ,last time
when it all went wrong.
Chorus I sit alone
remembering the good times
thinking back through the memories, thinking of you
But don't take this wrong
everything is better now
maybe just stay away
maybe ,from me.
Verse 2 Walk along without a glance
my smile my laugh
I'm in a trance.
You see this pass
and you regret
the time you've lost,the time I've spent.
Chorus I sit alone
remembering the good times
thinking back through the memories, thinking of you
But don't take this wrong
everything is better now
maybe just stay away
maybe ,from me.
Bridge And now you try to make your way back
asking please, saying I didn't mean to leave
but its too late I don't need you anymore
my smiles are true now so walk away.
Chorus I sit with friends
making every day
making new memories,with people that will stay
So thank you
I guess,for all that you've done
no need to come back
you can stay away
stay away
from me
Comments: 17
It's really good, I could hear the tune in my head ^^
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hahah thank you!!! what did it sound like? cus i havent gotten that far yet!
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Tunes are hard to explain...uhm...
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i cant possibly understand what you mean!!
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I like it so far. Could definitely use more work and figuring but I could get a good feeling of a beat and rhythm from what you have here. Might be worth the effort.
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cool thank you! ya theres a few bits i'd probably change if i'm going to continue with it!
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Well if you keep at it, then keep posting your edits! I'd love to watch the progress. ^.^
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it's very very good. I like it!
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