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Published: 2005-04-15 20:56:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description I'm just the kid from 44th St.
Sitting down on the old 48th St. Bridge
Listining to the speed of the cars
And wondering why nobody walks anymore

The wheels keep turning
The gas keeps burning
And the butter is churning
In the Drive-Thru Lane

My thoughts keep overlaping themselves
Cars, Snow and Dreaming Fast-Food
No meter in words but all through my brain
These patterns never seem to change

And I'm still just the kid from 44th St.
Sitting down on the old 48th St. Bridge
Listining as the speed of the cars slows down
"Mother Earth" must have ran out of gas
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Comments: 5

jenna-dee [2005-04-16 23:00:21 +0000 UTC]

i like this.
i understand what you are speaking about, the flow is a bit interupted for some reason. not sure why.. becasue it is very well written.
i LOVE the first paragraph. thats beautiful "And wondering why nobody walks anymore"

thats lovely.
thankyou ever so much for posting your work. i love to read it soo!
this is good. clever. interesting.

have a lovely day eric.

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ParanoidAndroid22 In reply to jenna-dee [2005-04-17 19:54:37 +0000 UTC]

I feel it rushed a bit, but maybe if I sit down and give it a second and third thought, I'll find out how to clear it up! Thank you for your consistant support! Your beauty overflows from your spirit and shows in your beautiful words! Thanks for encouraging me!
I hope you have the best of days,
~Eric

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immense-chagrin [2005-04-15 23:35:21 +0000 UTC]

whoa i like it. i don't necessarily like the end, but other than that it's good. it sounds like a bright eyes song to me. {THAT IS A GOOD THING- I LOVE THEM}

and am i counted as one of the two people?

comment on my pictures please. im working on my photography lately. thanks <3

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ParanoidAndroid22 In reply to immense-chagrin [2005-04-17 19:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Hah...well at least you liked part of it! I'm sick of people driving everywhere! Walking is great! Bright Eyes eh? Connor is a wonderful author, so thanks! {I LIKE HIS MUSIC ALRIGHT}

I said that jokingly but if you consider yourself someone who likes my poetry...sure!

Well, have a good day,
~Eric

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immense-chagrin In reply to ParanoidAndroid22 [2005-04-18 01:54:32 +0000 UTC]

its grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat

and im tony the tiger

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