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ParanoidAndroid22 — Easier Said Than Done
Published: 2004-06-20 04:16:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 130; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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Description It’s easier to want that to do
It’s easier to like than love
It’s easier to Velcro than tie your shoe
But where is easy when push comes to shove?
Life’s uncertainties take time to grasp
It takes a while to understand
It’s easier to cross a busy street
with someone holding your hand
But that someone will someday fade away
and your streets will be crossed all alone
Someday a hand will reach out to yours
needing comfort confronting their unknown
Unappreciated help hurts at first
Selfless love always comes with a sting
But take advice from veteran helpers
And see how much good it will bring
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Comments: 9

lovelyfairy [2004-08-13 19:58:19 +0000 UTC]

It real life.. and what yo wrote is true...

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ThePinkPoet [2004-07-04 12:42:44 +0000 UTC]

It must be done i like the part about where push comes to shove, it just stuck with me? I liked it.

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mysticsilverstar [2004-06-26 04:16:48 +0000 UTC]

this is really good..all your work is good...you play with your words on a right amount so that people can understand it...unlike my teacher's work..he writes stuff and i don't understand what he's writing lol...i love your work! keep up the great work!

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ParanoidAndroid22 In reply to mysticsilverstar [2004-06-26 04:20:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Thats one of my main chalenges when I write, to make it understandable for not only people who have experienced what I'm feeling, but also for those who haven't.
~Eric

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mysticsilverstar In reply to ParanoidAndroid22 [2004-06-26 04:24:21 +0000 UTC]

fabulously done!

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ParanoidAndroid22 In reply to mysticsilverstar [2004-06-26 04:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the kind comments! What could I improve though?

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mysticsilverstar In reply to ParanoidAndroid22 [2004-06-26 04:40:33 +0000 UTC]

improve?! umm...i ain't no expert at poetry....so i can't really tell you...sorry! but i like your poems and don't think they need any improvement

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ParanoidAndroid22 [2004-06-22 00:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so so so much! I wasn't sure if I liked it at first, but I think I like it more now. Thats how it is with a lot of my work. I'll think its rubbish at first but then it grows on me. I recently did some painting, but my scanner is being a butthead so i can't post it yet. Maby I'll take it to my school. They have a decent scanner and usually the computer lab is accessable durring the summer.

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jenna-dee [2004-06-21 09:54:31 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing. truely. your writing is as brilliant as yourself. a wonderful, excellent piece of work.

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