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Published: 2004-04-13 05:21:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Description Vanilla Ice always makes me smile
All of the while
These Sundays are so bittersweet
Tomorrow it’s gone
Yesterday’s banana peels
Something for your mind to slip on
Like in those cartoons we used to watch
Early Saturday’s
Which turned into bittersweet Sundays
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Comments: 6

sanguinarius [2004-06-22 12:03:55 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love this. I don't know what to say about it. It really makes me remember those days. "Early Saturday’s Which turned into bittersweet Sundays", I know exactly what you mean. Anyway conc. I love this.

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j-langer [2004-06-10 03:42:17 +0000 UTC]

i agree with lacy... banana peels are an intriguing idea. it reminds me of mario kart. it makes times feel playful and the challenge of using time wisely is deep no matter what the approach

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lacyleah [2004-06-06 05:42:43 +0000 UTC]

Ah this is cute!!! I like the lines "Yesterday’s banana peels
Something for your mind to slip on" Great great!

lacy*~

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ParanoidAndroid22 In reply to lacyleah [2004-06-06 21:32:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks lacy! I've been aching for some criticism. sometimes i begin to feel like my writings arent worth anything and its comments like those that make me change my mind! well have a great day
~Eric

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jenna-dee [2004-04-22 06:39:09 +0000 UTC]

this is really fantastic!! brilliant infact, i love your style!!

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ParanoidAndroid22 In reply to jenna-dee [2004-05-03 02:33:59 +0000 UTC]

Hey Jenna! Thanks! My name is Eric and im glad you like my stuff! I'm new here and will be posting more in the future. I must be going but have a wonderful day and I'll talk to you soon hopefully.
~Eric

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