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Published: 2009-05-28 23:47:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 399; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Stop! It's me. You. I love you.Don't leave. Not now. Not here.
It's wrong. My place is wrong.
Can't you see?
Yet, I'm unstable.
It dances. Like an ancient culture prays.
It's in the air. Pulsing around us, it glows.
Our aura's vibrant embrace.
I can, but see. Barely instantly glancing.
Blinds it more.
It's flying, above the clouds.
Higher than the heavens could ever reach.
Flightless mourning of beautiful sorrow.
Almost within grasp. Almost.
I don't believe myself.
Infatuated, I'm lost. The lies persuade.
Sing with it. Watch it dance.
Believe me when I can't.
I don't trust. Such crystal reads, forever us.
I believe it's there.
Love.
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Comments: 11
heartstrong [2009-07-26 05:16:17 +0000 UTC]
I think this speaks perfectly for my work, "The Neopets Orgy". It just really flows and expresses how I felt when I masterminded the piece.
I'm so glad we relate on this level of insightfulness.
Truly inspiring work.
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paravisual In reply to heartstrong [2009-07-26 05:37:08 +0000 UTC]
I am truly honored that we spiritually connected on such a high emotional level.
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heartstrong In reply to paravisual [2009-07-28 07:22:54 +0000 UTC]
Close your eyes, make a wish
And blow out the candlelight
For tonight is just your night
We're gonna celebrate, all thru the night
Pour the wine, light the fire
Girl your wish is my command
I submit to your demands
I'll do anything, girl you need only ask
Chorus:
I'll make love to you
Like you want me to
And I'll hold you tight
Baby all through the night
I'll make love to you
When you want me to
And I will not let go
Till you tell me to
do you like it? i made it up all by myself. its an original. i think ill call it "ill make love to you"
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colorlessday [2009-05-30 01:36:49 +0000 UTC]
i love your writing, zachariah
although reluctant, i must admit the music adds a tone.
the only complaint i have is how annoying it was seeing a comment from mandy below the poetry. a turn off, at the least.
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paravisual In reply to colorlessday [2009-05-30 02:42:40 +0000 UTC]
Agree with thee more I couldn't.
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synergizings [2009-05-28 23:50:21 +0000 UTC]
rename this cupcake.
my favorite of yours. but i still hate you.
holla-saurus rex.
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