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Entering the contest now : D here's the template, hopefully it's good improvement.. it's... 6 years anyway. Whoa.Somehow I feel like I would have expected more improvement for 6 long years... but oh well.
I also tried using the very same media and tools I used back then, even some of the same pencils too.
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Parororo In reply to ??? [2012-09-28 04:07:12 +0000 UTC]
you think so? more story? that's very good to hear, to me, really, thanks : D
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supergal12000 [2012-09-21 02:54:29 +0000 UTC]
the second one is beautiful ^-^ i love the new color improvement and all- its more proportionate- skinier, although, I do believe a bit of the meaning was lost with it as well- there is a heavier focus on what is more pleasing to the eye and less on what is artistically original/creative >< Butbut! The second one shows a lot of new technique and good beauty as well. I've seen your other works and you are one of the most renaissance with the type of pieces you have so overall improvement yes- creativity- up it a notch and you'll be oki doki. Then again- an artists main goal should always be to create things more interesting/creative- myself included ewe
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Parororo In reply to supergal12000 [2012-09-28 04:06:56 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot for your comment : D it's awesome that someone takes the time to view, look and consider the details and all.. really, thanks!
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Blue-Fire-likes-pie [2012-09-21 02:40:23 +0000 UTC]
What? I see tons of improvement. There's more detail, the shadows and lighting show much improvement, and everything seems more clean and a little bit more three dimensional :3 Its amazing. Really beautiful
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Frankie-Dixon [2012-09-21 02:31:49 +0000 UTC]
The new one shoes obvious improvements..like the hair on it is very pretty..and the apples are drawn nicely. but the first one i'd have to like better. it just draws me in with the expression of the girl. and i like the bordering of old more..so yea it's improved..but the old one had that feeling i liked.
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Parororo In reply to Frankie-Dixon [2012-09-28 04:05:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah the expression was something that played against me somehow... thanks for noticing and commenting : >
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h0n3yd011 [2012-09-21 01:46:48 +0000 UTC]
i feel as though the composition of the previous one is a tad stronger than the newer version. granted i love everything else about the newer one but there's something about the older one that catches my eye more. hrmmm...
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Parororo In reply to h0n3yd011 [2012-09-28 04:05:13 +0000 UTC]
That's possible.. I changed the composition to something I wasn't 100% sure about...
Anyways, thank you very much for your comment : >
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arawsa In reply to h0n3yd011 [2012-09-21 07:08:53 +0000 UTC]
It's the composition and background.
It has more depth in the older one, and is more mysterious and eye catching.
In the newer one, the coloring/shading, anatomy and style improved in my opinion.
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Parororo In reply to arawsa [2012-09-28 04:05:34 +0000 UTC]
You think so? that's something very valid, I'll take that into consideration, thanks !
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Trinitykitteh [2012-09-21 01:44:12 +0000 UTC]
So you went from awesome, to even more awesome! You never stop to amaze me <3
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Nissa13th In reply to ??? [2012-09-21 00:56:26 +0000 UTC]
There is noticable improvement. The improvments are small bits here and there that help retain the feel of the older version but show growth in the newer version as if this were a person in real life growing and changing more into themselves and retaining who they are as a person. I noticed this all just with the girl...not even yet getting to the background. I love the differences in the apples. There is more expression in the newer version might I add.
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Parororo In reply to Nissa13th [2012-09-28 04:04:35 +0000 UTC]
This is very appreciated, thank you for taking the time to comment and analyze like that .w. really
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IvyKesner [2012-09-21 00:54:40 +0000 UTC]
This is really well done. I loved the original and I love the remake. But what I'm most impressed with is that you used the same stuff-even the pencils and the technique has really improved a lot. Keep up the awesome work Mr. Pairo!
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Parororo In reply to IvyKesner [2012-09-28 04:04:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much .w. it's.. it's good to feel like people can notice an improvement too, really, thanks!
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chium In reply to ??? [2012-09-21 00:41:16 +0000 UTC]
Mmm... yo creo que si has mejorado mucho, Pairo.
Se nota un manejo mucho mayor de las proporciones y anatomía humana (dentro del contexto de una figura humana estilizada). También de las iluminaciones y sombras, además de la profundidad. La técnica también mejoró.
En resumen, la nueva versión es mucho más rica y compleja visualmente.
Kudos to you, Pyro!
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Parororo In reply to chium [2012-09-28 04:03:46 +0000 UTC]
Este tipo de comentarios se aprecian mucho : >
Es grato ver que alguien se tome el tiempo para analizar y comentar de esta forma, en serio, gracias : D
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Moossey [2012-09-21 00:41:05 +0000 UTC]
I like the lineart in the older one better and the coloring in the most recent one better.
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Deerl [2012-09-21 00:36:12 +0000 UTC]
woooohh! igual me gustan los 2 xD me encanta el "nuevo efecto de los árboles" y el pelo! que detalles ;u;!
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SomaRuiz In reply to ??? [2012-09-21 00:32:47 +0000 UTC]
Es que desde aquel entonces ya eras muy bueno. = D
Creo que cambió más el estilo que la técnica, pero ambos mejoraron. ^^
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Parororo In reply to SomaRuiz [2012-09-28 04:03:22 +0000 UTC]
Hey muchas gracias : >
Y pues sip, : P la técnica traté de mantenerla .. o sea, usar la misma de esa vez.. para ver si.. bueno... no se puede cambiar mucho xD gracias !
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SomaRuiz In reply to Parororo [2012-09-28 17:57:52 +0000 UTC]
Jaja, le atiné. XD
Y de nada. ^^
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Parororo In reply to julif-art [2012-09-28 04:02:44 +0000 UTC]
xD esa frase me da como risa, hehe gracias !
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julif-art In reply to Parororo [2012-09-28 04:04:41 +0000 UTC]
uy perdon aveces oldido que no todo el que habla español es argentino XD. seguro que vas a ganar ese bolso deviant-nomade o como se llame
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Parororo In reply to julif-art [2012-09-28 04:17:47 +0000 UTC]
hahah xD es que, la frase de "sos groso, sabélo" la encuentro demasiado genial/graciosa,
y WUW ojalá ! quiero ese bolso! xDD aunque hay trabajos muchisimo mejores con esto de las mejoras! djfhsdjk
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Tai-Porto [2012-09-21 00:23:40 +0000 UTC]
ooh, I was trying to remember the older drawing you redrew, now I do! o 3 o
good luck in the contest~
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Parororo In reply to Tai-Porto [2012-09-28 04:02:33 +0000 UTC]
ohoho, it's quite old is it?.. and hey thanks : D
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SquidTowne In reply to ??? [2012-09-21 00:18:24 +0000 UTC]
Love them both, it's hard to say which one is better.
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rawrr-3 [2012-09-21 00:18:09 +0000 UTC]
ether way your way beter then me ;w; i love you art so much ;u;
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Rendaylor In reply to ??? [2012-09-21 00:17:20 +0000 UTC]
I love how it really feels like 2 different points in the character's own time. Like the character aged right along with you
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Parororo In reply to Rendaylor [2012-09-28 04:02:06 +0000 UTC]
that's a very interesting thought : > and true too, hehe, thanks !
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Nissa13th In reply to Rendaylor [2012-09-21 00:56:51 +0000 UTC]
Thats what I had thought as well.
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