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thoughts un saidfeelings un shared
im absconding from reality
hiding myself in the shelter of fantasy
dreams i have called my own
have turned into falselity
yet i wish for a gleamy future
illustrious path moments of glory
though im foible yes i confess it
but i want to live with these sins!!
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The inner toughts of this poems are great, but I think you could have chosen better words to express them.
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hmmm like which words u thnk to b reversed?
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I would write it like that:
Thoughs unsaid
feelings unshared
I'm hiding from reality
hiding myself in the shelter of fantasy
dreams i have called my own
have turned into dust
yet i wish for a bright future
illustrious path moments of glory
though im weak yes i confess it
but i want to live with these sins!!
Hope you like my version of it.
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yah its nice, i like "illustrious path moments of glory" i'd change it..!!
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hehey nice poem. a bit depressin for my tastes but still pretty good
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thnxx!!! this is all whn i waz n still confused to make a decision!!
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:Aww: thanku soooooooooooo muchhh!!!
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