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Published: 2008-05-18 02:43:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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not-hypercool.i know this is just... idiotic beyond belief, but I dunno. i just dunno.
crits/suggestions would be appreciated, especially on the background (or lack thereof) @__@;;
the strawberry looks moldy...
OTL
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Comments: 9
RisingMelodies [2008-05-20 00:05:00 +0000 UTC]
lol
pink back for l
hahaha
you could have maybe shoed more of the letter l
and his mouth is kinda funny
...maybe a texture would make up for the lack of background....
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acerbic-commentary [2008-05-19 20:17:39 +0000 UTC]
1) remove the white around the strawberry
2) L's eyes are a little too close/high on his face. Like, aren't they set back a little more? IDKWHUT
3) make the bg L larger so it swallows up the entire picture The way its set makes it look... awkward and non-belonging.
MAH SUGGESTIONS. ARE THEY NOT BEAUTIFUL?!
Also, HYPER-COOL FOREVER lol A bunch of the French AP kids have shirts that read "Ma mere dit que je suis hyper-cool" which is pretty much the best sentence ever. DON'T UNDERSTAND IT?! LOOK IT UP!
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ParsnipSniffer In reply to acerbic-commentary [2008-05-19 20:46:19 +0000 UTC]
hmm... those are valid suggestions. but with the white around the strawberry, i'm not sure if it will print too well if i take it out... like the red might be too close to the bg. do you think i should change the bg color or something? @__@
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acerbic-commentary In reply to ParsnipSniffer [2008-05-20 19:32:45 +0000 UTC]
Then cut out the pink bg, obviously /dodges rubbish being thrown at her/ Uhh I'm not sure. I think if you're getting a good print done, then there should be no color coordination problems
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ParsnipSniffer In reply to acerbic-commentary [2008-05-20 19:35:13 +0000 UTC]
nvm it doesn't matter cause i didn't get a table. *wallows* poooo. -__-lll
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6o4-animegurl [2008-05-19 04:48:12 +0000 UTC]
Haha its cute! XD you have to stop beating yourself up! )< You colored that strawberry extremely well! It looks so life-like (and non-moldy) O: I like the pink in his hair~ Plus, i think the background is fine the way it is. Nice and simple C:
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5th-ninth-993 [2008-05-18 19:45:11 +0000 UTC]
The texture of his skin and his pose are awesome!~ I love his hair! *___*
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