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Published: 2016-07-07 20:35:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description Small spoilers for Thorn's story (but its right up at the begining and kinda obvious its gonna happen so its not that major-)

Ok so..I'm really proud of this?? Like wowza?? Please look at this instead of my 203764 reference sheets and sh!tposts?? please and thank

So I got two new characters (both un-named but names are being considered! Was gonna call the pale one Rose but her daughter is already called Rose, so its bein changed lmao) like not even a week ago and then I made em fall in love and then I made brownie over here a Crowfather™ and Clear Sky™ fusion. Now here's the scene of him becoming his fusion and leaving his wife and two children

Once I put more into Thorn's story (gonna start on stuff for it soon, within the year atleast) then this will make more sense and be a lot sadder bc Thorn's whole life relies on his CrowSky™ father jfc I'm evil-

(Idk what happened to my style I was just doodling and it transformed into this and then I was like 'o ok then' and now its staying)
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RaspberryRosewing [2016-08-02 20:40:39 +0000 UTC]

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I honestly love your artwork! But Maybe try adding the cats' outline thinner? I know, it may be your style, but just a suggestion! Although the Characters are original, the whole moral of the Cat from another clan having kits with another cat from another Clan is kinda overused. Maybe add more originality? Maybe one of the kits survives, but gives up in the long run? Have the father realize that he was wrong? You could make deaths, but have them be short, and make the reader be attached. The characters have to have depth. Thank you for reading my really Long Paragraph!~

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Skyamii [2016-07-07 20:52:38 +0000 UTC]

this looks so good 
youve improved so much dude ;v;

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Pashuo In reply to Skyamii [2016-07-07 21:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh thank youuu! That means so much omg QwQ

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Skyamii In reply to Pashuo [2016-07-07 21:09:44 +0000 UTC]

yw! <33
;v; aa im glad it does 



your art gives me life its so cute ;;

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icicle60 [2016-07-07 20:41:27 +0000 UTC]

' o okay then' k

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Pashuo In reply to icicle60 [2016-07-07 20:44:41 +0000 UTC]

Basically describes my life choices

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