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"________?"



"________? Ve, ________! Are you okay?" A hand frantically waved in front of your face, snapping you out of your daydreaming.

"H-Huh? What…?" you blinked several times before you turned your head to face the Italian brunette who had his eyes closed like usual and his head tilted to the side.

"What's wrong, ________?" he asked in concern. "Aren't you coming?"

"I-Italy…?" you stuttered. All of a sudden, realization dawned on you. You remembered everything: staying up late, watching the HetaOni videos, a creepy voice, the vortex, a hand… Then a huge rush of emotions made you burst out and exclaim, "Italy!"

His eyes flew open when you suddenly tackled him into a hug, causing him to lose balance and both of you fell to the ground. You were practically wailing into his shoulder and your body was shaking uncontrollably.

"_-_______? What are you…! D-Don't cry!" He tried to calm you down, but only succeeded in making himself cry with you.

"Italy, y-you…alone…don't b-be…stupid Steve…I-I'll always be with you…" were the only words he could understand between your sobs. Still, they made him freeze for a moment and stare at you in disbelief.

"Alone…?" he thought, the word echoing in his mind. "Wait…what does she…?"

"Oi! What's the hold up? Are you two coming or what?"

Both of you looked up to see Prussia and Japan standing at the door of the ominous white mansion. Japan was holding the door open while Prussia was beckoning you guys to hurry up.

"Ve! We're coming! Wait for us!" Italy helped you to your feet and softly hushed your cries. "It's okay, bella. Don't be scared. Everything will be fine as long as we're together! So please…please don't cry." He smiled his signature bright smile, but you knew that something was off; that he wasn't truly smiling. He was only trying to cheer you up. It saddened you, but you were grateful for his help. He wiped away your tears and took your hand in his, gently pulling you towards Prussia and Japan.

Japan was the first to notice something was wrong. "________-san, are you alright?"

You nodded meekly and grinned slightly. "I'm fine, Japan…"

"Kesesesese, you were about to chicken out, weren't you? After all that big talk about not being scared, you break down crying!" he laughed arrogantly before winking at you with a crooked grin. "Don't worry! The awesome me will protect you from the scary ghosts!"

You immediately fumed and whacked him on the head, earning a yelp of pain from him, while you lightly blushed. "Like hell I'm going to run into your arms! I can take care of myself! And I'm not afraid of anything! Not even ghosts!" Or even scone-colored butt-naked aliens!

"Bruder, stop provoking ________ and come inside already," Germany sighed in irritation while pinching the bridge of his nose.

"Hey, it cheered her up, didn't it?" Prussia cockily grinned with a tear still in his eye as he rubbed the spot where you had hit him. You stuck your tongue out at him childishly. He smirked and stuck out his tongue at you while folding his arms behind his head. As you, Italy, and Prussia all walked inside, you noticed Japan was about to close the door behind you guys.

"Wait! J-Japan! Don't…!" you tried to warn him with an outstretched hand, but Italy gently squeezed your other hand. You turned to face his sad, understanding eyes.

"It's okay…" he whispered to you with a reassuring smile. "We're fine."

You furrowed your brows in worry and hesitated, still unconvinced, but nodded slowly and just watched Japan close the door with a click. You, Italy, Japan, Prussia, and Germany all took a look around. There were three white hallways: one to your left, one to your right, and one in front of you. The hallway in front of you had a staircase next to it, leading upstairs.

"It's cleaner than I thought," Italy observed with a finger on his chin.

"H-Hey can we go now?" Germany stammered, sounding a little afraid. You wanted to facepalm. How can the creator make Germany so OOC? He's supposed to be the strong one here! Then again, the creator did base HetaOni off of Ao Oni Jikkyou…

Prussia smirked. "What's the matter, West? You scared?"

CRASH!

All of you jumped at the sound, even though you knew it would happen. Your heart was racing with panic and you felt the tension build. A siren was blaring in your head, warning you of danger, and the hairs on your neck stood up.

"L-Look, we really should go now," Germany urged you guys. You snorted. Too late for that.

Japan dismissed Germany with a wave of his hand. "Oh, do not be silly. It is not like there are any ghosts or anything. Where is your common sense?" He began to walk in the direction of the sound of the crash. You instantly reached out and grabbed his arm, surprising everyone.

"Are you crazy? We can't split up! Don't you watch those horror movies? Whenever the people split up, the monster takes them down one by one!" you exclaimed.

Japan arched an eyebrow with a hint of confusion and amusement in his eyes. "Yes, I watch them ________-san… (without America-san, thank goodness) …but we are not in a horror movie. This is real life. There are no monsters." He tugged his arm away from your grasp and continued to walk away. You wanted to laugh harshly and say, "That's what you think. You have no idea."

"Th-Then let's all go check it out!" you pleaded desperately.

Japan didn't even bother to look back. "I am just going to take a quick look. I will be right back."

"Be careful, Japan!" Prussia cautioned as you all watched his retreating back. You bit your bottom lip and clenched your fists. Damn it. This was the part where Japan will find the broken plate on the floor and when he returns, he'll find everyone missing, which means Steve is going to show up soon. You felt torn. What should you do? Should you stay with the group, or go with Japan? You turned to Italy, hoping he would give you some guidance, but he had his hands folded behind his back and his glazed eyes were staring down absentmindedly at his dark brown boots. He looked so lost and alone, even though he was surrounded by friends who cared about him… You sighed and closed your eyes briefly before reopening them with a hard look of resolve.

-Stay with the group or go with Japan?

->The group
Japan

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Comments: 137

kibou-to-shinrai [2012-08-16 19:55:26 +0000 UTC]

TT_TT I'm not going to survive~~~!!!

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PastaNotWar In reply to kibou-to-shinrai [2012-08-21 20:21:58 +0000 UTC]

X3

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kibou-to-shinrai In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-08-22 01:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Er. What's with the broom? XD

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PastaNotWar In reply to kibou-to-shinrai [2012-08-22 14:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Well, in the second option, you use the broom handle and a plate shard to make a spear... I was trying to think of creative ways to make weapons using the items lying around OTL

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kibou-to-shinrai In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-08-23 01:26:26 +0000 UTC]

If I had to make a weapon with stuff lying around... I'd find a knife in the kitchen and put it on the broom instead of the plate shard! ...Or I'd use my awesomeness.

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RavenHimitsu [2012-05-23 23:18:07 +0000 UTC]

I love you this made my week <3

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PastaNotWar In reply to RavenHimitsu [2012-05-24 00:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!! ;w; I'm so happy to hear that!!~ And thank you for the llama!!

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RavenHimitsu In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-05-26 22:12:24 +0000 UTC]

No problem! :hugsplz:

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PastaNotWar In reply to RavenHimitsu [2012-05-27 03:10:30 +0000 UTC]

XD

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RavenHimitsu In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-05-27 04:50:00 +0000 UTC]

Thats the emocon I was looking for Thank You! :Huggle!:

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RavenHimitsu In reply to RavenHimitsu [2012-05-27 04:50:38 +0000 UTC]

No I did it again! >.<

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RavenHimitsu In reply to RavenHimitsu [2012-05-26 22:13:30 +0000 UTC]

*facepalm* I fail with emocons >.< Sorry

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grapepopcicle123 [2012-02-20 20:31:07 +0000 UTC]

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I will die if you don't finish this story of more awesome than prussia win! DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

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PastaNotWar In reply to grapepopcicle123 [2012-02-20 20:56:03 +0000 UTC]

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grapepopcicle123 In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-02-24 14:08:01 +0000 UTC]

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British-Hero [2012-02-12 11:55:46 +0000 UTC]

*randomly comments again* This story is too good D:> *hugs* Japan! Don't go on your own! TTATT

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XxPeachyxMisaxX [2012-02-11 06:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Ah Italy ve~ I wanna go where you go!

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PastaNotWar In reply to XxPeachyxMisaxX [2012-02-11 20:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Ve~, Okay! Grazie~
Me: And thanks for commenting! XD

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XxPeachyxMisaxX In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-02-12 01:04:18 +0000 UTC]

*hugs Italy* aww

And you too author for such wonderful idea! *hugs* do you plan on continuing?

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PastaNotWar In reply to XxPeachyxMisaxX [2012-02-12 03:53:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~! Oh definitely! You'll see an update real soon~

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XxPeachyxMisaxX In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-02-12 04:34:38 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome! I will look forward to it~!

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MiniMandy13 [2012-02-11 00:52:25 +0000 UTC]

I CHOOSE STAY WITH GROUP!~ Ve!~

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PastaNotWar In reply to MiniMandy13 [2012-02-11 02:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Sweet, okay! XD Thanks for commenting~

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TheSacredSiren [2012-01-22 12:20:42 +0000 UTC]

This is so awesome! Frickin' hell, I'm only a teen. And all these nations are 100s of years old. xD

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PastaNotWar In reply to TheSacredSiren [2012-01-22 22:35:14 +0000 UTC]

Omg you're totally right! XD lol Oh well~ They look like they're in their twenties >w<

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TheSacredSiren In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-01-23 15:03:42 +0000 UTC]

They can be how old they want if they play with moi~

... JESUS CHRIST, FRANCE, STOP IT. D:

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PastaNotWar In reply to TheSacredSiren [2012-01-23 15:33:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, seriously. Listen to her ya perv.

You can't stop l'amour~!

Me: -_- *unamused and whacks him upside the head*

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TheSacredSiren In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-01-23 15:48:54 +0000 UTC]

France, you may have similar hair to me, BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN YOU CAN MAKE ME SAY PEDO-LIKE STUFF.

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YukinaXAlMadara [2012-01-22 09:48:03 +0000 UTC]

fdvgfcvgdf MOAR!

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PastaNotWar In reply to YukinaXAlMadara [2012-01-22 22:34:09 +0000 UTC]

Okay~

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Tiamet [2012-01-21 05:08:55 +0000 UTC]

I just finished watching Hetaoni today, so this story is getting me WAY excited

As for a weapon, I like the crowbar suggestion, or a baseball bat They seem more natural to have around, and I figure you could probably find one of those in the house somewhere. Plus I've played softball for a few years, so I would KICK. BUTT. with a bat

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PastaNotWar In reply to Tiamet [2012-01-22 02:42:27 +0000 UTC]

Awww why thank you! ^^ lol I know, once you watch it, you're hooked XD

Okay, gotcha! Thanks for your suggestions~ and lol I bet you would XD

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FinnahShella [2012-01-20 03:07:31 +0000 UTC]

FFUUUUU
I'M IN HETAONI LAND.

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PastaNotWar In reply to FinnahShella [2012-01-20 03:53:39 +0000 UTC]

YOU KNOW IT. >8D lol

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Zea900 [2012-01-19 21:37:59 +0000 UTC]

My weapon of choice: ELEMENTAL POWERS. AWWYISS. Yes, I have an obsession with these XD

Okay, here we go...the flood of emotions from the first time I watched this! *prepares boxes of Kleenex*

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PastaNotWar In reply to Zea900 [2012-01-20 00:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh that would be EPIC XDD Hm, I don't know though...I was thinking more along the lines of swords, axes, daggers and such if that's okay...? D:

Yes, keep a box of tissues close by~

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Zea900 In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-01-20 01:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I have no problem with those! Daggers would make me feel like a badass assassin hehe c:

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PastaNotWar In reply to Zea900 [2012-01-20 01:34:52 +0000 UTC]

Ohoho, definitely~ >8D

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yotsuki [2012-01-18 23:42:56 +0000 UTC]

Ok, so I read this for the first time a while ago and was like "What's HetaOni?" I went off to Youtube to be schooled in the awesome (by Prussia of course) so now I can, with a heart full of FEELINGS (Oh Italy... T_T and England T_T and America T_T and-) please update soon!!

(And I think they made Germany OOC too, but, well...what can you do? Except snicker of course)

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PastaNotWar In reply to yotsuki [2012-01-19 00:19:10 +0000 UTC]

Yaaay~! Another HetaOni fan joined~! I will update, don't worry! It's just that I have exams and stuff coming up so I need to study and take a break from stories for a while... And yeah, Germany? You're so right lol XD Their character portraits make me laugh so hard~

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yotsuki In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-01-20 03:12:59 +0000 UTC]

I know! I'm glad they got rid of the "derp" face later in the series, although I didn't think Japan or Italy's were too bad.

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PastaNotWar In reply to yotsuki [2012-01-20 03:46:28 +0000 UTC]

That's true~ lol I'm happy they went from this>> to this>> too X3 So much better~ (No offense Germany 8D We still love you~)

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yotsuki In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-01-20 05:07:30 +0000 UTC]

And from this -> to this -> (America, I should not be giggling when I see your face. If I am, there is something wrong with... one of us. And it's your turn) And Oh, god England... ( -> He looked like a Germany recolor! No offense Doitsu~)

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Sigity [2012-01-17 06:01:52 +0000 UTC]

I'd have a sword! Q A Q

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PastaNotWar In reply to Sigity [2012-01-20 00:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Sweet! Okay, thanks~ ^^

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AnnaMay15 [2012-01-15 10:27:03 +0000 UTC]

I love this series! HetaOni is a great story and I'm glad someone made a good reader insert of this!
Hmmm... or ? ....I guess would say stay with the group. We know nothing bad happens to Japan and, plus the group may need help! Plus it might be fun to see a slight action scene!
Weapon? Bow and arrows? Staff? Sword? (I like old fashined kinda weapons )
Update soon please?

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PastaNotWar In reply to AnnaMay15 [2012-01-20 00:53:01 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you! ^^ I know, this series is so amazing~!
Yeah, I'll include the two choices in part 3 to show what would have happened if you chose either one.
Sweet! Yeah I was thinking of doing those types of weapons ^^
I will update, don't worry, but not right now cuz I've got exams and such D: I'll post a preview in my journal though soon!

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AnnaMay15 In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-01-21 02:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! I know right? HetaOni is great!
Awww yay! Sounds fun! The story is going to have allot of choices?
Aww good luck on exams ok? Those can be tough!

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PastaNotWar In reply to AnnaMay15 [2012-01-21 02:30:48 +0000 UTC]

Yep! I plan on giving the reader some options now and then~ That way it's more fun and interactive ^^
Thank you! That means a lot~ >w<

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PastaNotWar In reply to PastaNotWar [2012-01-20 00:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I meant part 2

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