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Published: 2009-09-08 01:08:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 1553; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 637
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CRITIQUES WANTED!!!
Changed Patch, and turned her into a student, in a series called Vampire Knight.
She would be a vampire chick...and just because I can >w<
This, would be the Female Night Class Uniform.
Enjoy!!
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I was wondering if you'd like to request a critique for your human artwork and I'm glad you've done, so let's start:
In this one, what really caught my attention was the outfit you did for Patch, I guess it was the way you could work with an almost completed white outfit without making it look plain. Besides I like all those small details on the socks and the symbol in her neck makes her more original, I haven't seen many characters with that, so nice work on that Amy! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Your coloring is good as usual, overall I like how it came up in the hair; but I think should keep an eye on her hands, there some minor details on them but I'm sure you're aware of them and that you'll fix in your next drawings.
I can't wait to see more of your human artwork, you're on the right way and this is the proof of that. Hope you can show us one of these pics with one of those amazing backgrounds you accustom to do! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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This is what I meant about the detail! You're expanding it nicely, and it flows so well!
Way to go!
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Thk you so much dude, at some point I didn't like what I wrote in this one 
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Wow, she's lovely ^^
I'm writing a manga of Vampire Knight with Mine and 's OCs and I need some other OCs. Would you like your OC to be in it?
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I do not mind.
Make sure you possibly link me the bits that my character's in, if you do not mind doing so.
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OHHH WOW i like how U make this i mean the anime humans are ones of the most difficult things to do..well at least for me HHHEHEHE GOOD JOB >W<
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okay! so you want critics huh? well! first of all! if you think im goin a little too harsh on you, lets say that i maybe too severe...
okay...so the hands! well you are in a good step! but i recommend to see some tutorial about hands, it could be useful. try tutorial, they are really good reference!
also, i suggest to draw the anatomy of humain, like you can learn where the bones are placed, or learning physical head, i mean, is your choice if you want to draw anime style but if you learn drawing real stuff like real person, you might learn some or three or more stuff!
Mm....lets say, in average, is a good start! so i recommend to go in CA *not in canada lol* but CA is conceptart.org, go to this web and go to the forum, theres plenty of stuff in there, *you arent that skillful, even I am not good yet for be a member of CA.
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Alright, I'll keep that in mind, its just with human stuff like this (anime crap lol) I've been drawing this way for awhile, try to a custom to each manga style, and also try to keep everything in line, but it the end, it just doesn't seem to work out, ys know? xD;
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oh! *i forgot i comment something like that! i was sure that i forgot to send it to you* well the lines are very good! also is your choice to choose an art style. so i dont say some style are better than others, is just that it would be a good way to pratice different kind of stuff!
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Yeah, true to that!
I'm not that good at human/anime stuff like this
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well is might be good at try some new stuff ya know! look the environnement! draw threes! or might items around you! theres many stuff to learn! the best way is traditionnal drawing! emotion will help you to draw stuff like if your mad, you will draw something who have the key of the picture like rage, madness, even if your happy, you might draw something like nice, bright day or stuff like that! so! i wont say everything to help you but a part of it. (i got a long list to say, thats why...)but please, awnser me want are you good and want are you NOT good! i will awnser what to do!
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Well, I have been practicing on drawing flowers, lately
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well thats good to hear!
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but we are Never too good for art! theres always pratice to do get better!
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Yeah, hellz to that xD
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well, we did have some nice conversation! well, anyway! Hi my names is dark1992! nice to meet ya! im a artist with alot of passion of drawing and to learn as well! I like video-games as well sonic , mario, snake, etc. and i dislike salad!
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Oh! =o I like the way this came up sis, you did great with the body proportions and her uniform, nice design!
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Thanks, the uniformdesigns I got off of google xD
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No problem!
And all right, I got it xDDD;
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Well, thank ya kindly
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