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you are bittersweetwithout you time is split
as if it bleed
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Scndangelo [2006-07-15 07:19:43 +0000 UTC]
Feel the taste of noble
as the sun diperses with it's reddish light
blood is just a buble...
I wish my lover can write some haiku's to me also...
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patrickbateman In reply to Scndangelo [2006-07-15 08:29:51 +0000 UTC]
wow it is so great well done
i am sure that you will have some soon
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Scndangelo In reply to patrickbateman [2006-07-15 11:57:18 +0000 UTC]
He says, to say I love you is not an action in mannish style... He wants to show it by taking care and being so close...Well it's a nice way but, who will talk about the poems?... where are the others of you? can we see?
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patrickbateman In reply to Scndangelo [2006-07-15 21:14:12 +0000 UTC]
definetly a great starts and i am sure that poems will come
well i am still a rookie and only have 3 or 4 more
i might submit them i suppose, but they all are a bit same, the topic i mean, they are all related with him and how much i miss him
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Scndangelo In reply to patrickbateman [2006-07-16 20:31:55 +0000 UTC]
According to me there must be something importnant for us to create some artistic subject...And missing him is a great excuse( ! ) to write some poems...
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patrickbateman In reply to Scndangelo [2006-07-17 07:26:41 +0000 UTC]
well yeah you are right
and i suppose i will write more and more day by day, since situation is getting a bit more complicated
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Scndangelo In reply to patrickbateman [2006-07-18 20:36:29 +0000 UTC]
Wish and strongly hope that you can find a way to be with him soon...We can read the poems of a passionate love....
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patrickbateman In reply to Scndangelo [2006-07-19 08:33:09 +0000 UTC]
oh dear, your words are so relaxing and hope they will come true as soon as possible
thanks a lot
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Scndangelo In reply to patrickbateman [2006-07-19 12:31:12 +0000 UTC]
So please please you wish the same for me...
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kayana [2006-07-08 03:54:08 +0000 UTC]
wow, i wish it be longer, so far i love how you write
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patrickbateman In reply to kayana [2006-07-10 08:01:16 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot dear
i did write 3 more haikus hopefully i will post them too
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TheMetronomad [2006-06-22 07:48:16 +0000 UTC]
definitely an A+++ Submit your Poems at Poetry dot com i've been published already!
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patrickbateman In reply to TheMetronomad [2006-07-05 08:01:28 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot and really glad that you like it
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TheMetronomad In reply to patrickbateman [2006-07-05 09:00:40 +0000 UTC]
i'm a sucker for romance! nice haiku.... my favorite is "Basho" a japanese poet.
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patrickbateman In reply to TheMetronomad [2006-07-05 09:02:59 +0000 UTC]
ah yeah read some works of basho years ago, trying to find the book which is called Haiku Year, Michael Stipe's haikus are in it and i do worship him
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patrickbateman In reply to TheMetronomad [2006-07-05 10:23:13 +0000 UTC]
hehehehehe he is among the three
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Lady-Fuschia [2006-06-21 22:05:48 +0000 UTC]
this is so beautiful and powerful, I really love it
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patrickbateman In reply to Lady-Fuschia [2006-07-05 07:55:25 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot really glad that you love it
and also thanks a lot for the
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