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Description hey guys! Just showing you a snip of a Sasosaku in progress~

Keep our fingers crossed that I'll be able to finish this before Sasosaku month ends. I'm still contemplating whether to add and/or remove some parts *couch*clothes*cough*. Depends how my mind will work, mufufufufu~

Anyways, cheerio peepz!
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Eun-Chan13 [2012-11-28 03:56:07 +0000 UTC]

oowww ~.~ i can' wait!!! loooks so goood!!! :adoration:

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patzy28 In reply to Eun-Chan13 [2012-11-28 08:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I'm pretty much working on it

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kaylovesyew [2012-11-27 22:04:59 +0000 UTC]

no clothes X//////X im such a perv xD

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patzy28 In reply to kaylovesyew [2012-11-27 22:39:24 +0000 UTC]

LOL! Apparently, I've recently heard smething about DA deleting hentai artworks and I wouldn't want that to happen to mine, so I'd probably just have them in clothes.
Either way, I'll try to make it a matured as possible (I don't really know how probably just rip their clothes, durrhurrhurr...)

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kaylovesyew In reply to patzy28 [2012-11-28 00:13:46 +0000 UTC]

oh no wonder, im a fan of hentai

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wisteria-fields25 [2012-11-27 12:53:47 +0000 UTC]

Ish HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!

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patzy28 In reply to wisteria-fields25 [2012-11-27 13:36:07 +0000 UTC]

I tried
Will try to add more spunk to make it sizzle more

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wisteria-fields25 In reply to patzy28 [2012-11-28 08:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, can't wait for the final pic

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Gigicerisier [2012-11-26 10:00:05 +0000 UTC]

Oho, Uber Smexy. *drools*
I can't wait to see more of your SasoSaku.
I really need to start doodling some SasoSaku too or Sadsori will kill me. *gasps*

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patzy28 In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-26 11:35:50 +0000 UTC]

will try to work on it. Unfortunately, education comes first. I haven't studied for this week's exams. I'll post is as soon as I've finished cleaning the draft. 'til then, keep tense. Durrhurrhurr...

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WorstPlayer [2012-11-26 09:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Too softcore, it needs more action!

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patzy28 In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-26 11:40:04 +0000 UTC]

Nyerr, I'm still new to this style so you'd have to bear with me.
I'm open to suggestions though

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WorstPlayer In reply to patzy28 [2012-11-26 14:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Well, I don't know what do you want to do with this, but I'm a hardcore hentai fan (browse my Emperor's Maidens folder with a bag in case of vomit), but, romantic stuff is always well recieved when is enought hot and the watchers like the couple, that's a fact. As I said, I don't like softcore, but your drawing is expressive, so, you may make it bigger and color it. If you color it, try not to use dark colors, would look more romantic if it looks somewhat "cute". You may use a white background, that will make the couple stand out. But, if you decide to show more, you may want the escene to look hotter, but that's a matter of taste. And remember: The couple may look like doing sexual things, even you can draw the full bodies, but, if you don't show genitals, it's not hentai.

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-27 15:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I'm Gigicerisier. *waves*
Sorry to interrupt your conversation but I couldn't resist as you said you liked hentai.


>Well, I don't know what do you want to do with this, but I'm a hardcore hentai fan (browse my Emperor's Maidens folder with a bag in case of vomit), but, romantic stuff is always well recieved when is enought hot and the watchers like the couple, that's a fact. As I said, I don't like softcore, but your drawing is expressive, so, you may make it bigger and color it. If you color it, try not to use dark colors, would look more romantic if it looks somewhat "cute". You may use a white background, that will make the couple stand out. But, if you decide to show more, you may want the escene to look hotter, but that's a matter of taste. And remember: The couple may look like doing sexual things, even you can draw the full bodies, but, if you don't show genitals, it's not hentai.

I tried to doodle romantic erotica and some of them were reall loved by people but sadly DA(thanks to some Sakura bashers *sarcasm*) deleted them.
Anyway, I wonder if you fancy seeing my hentai SasoSaku pics. (I uploaded most on tumblr.)

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WorstPlayer In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-27 16:02:23 +0000 UTC]

I think the same thing will happen to my upcoming works, but I don't care, internet is not DA. And, about your pics, I don't like Naruto, but some hentai pics are cool when they are well drawn, so, I want to see yours.

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-27 16:28:04 +0000 UTC]

>I think the same thing will happen to my upcoming works, but I don't care, internet is not DA. And, about your pics, I don't like Naruto, but some hentai pics are cool when they are well drawn, so, I want to see yours.

Well I just like Sakura and Sasori mostly. I prefer Claymore(even though I haven't read for ages) and code: breaker.
Splended.
My tumblr called Gigi's Erotica. [link]
Search those pics with a tag SasoSaku erotica.
Well I'm not sure my SasoSaku pics are well-drawn but I've got very kinky mind so hopefully they will entertain you. *ponders*

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patzy28 In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-27 17:09:18 +0000 UTC]

Whaaat? They delete submitted explicit artworks here?? Then what's the point of adding the mature content option when submitting an artwork?? It's still art, nontheless.
.______.

Sidenote: screw the bashers. They're not worth the attention. *pats shoulder*

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Gigicerisier In reply to patzy28 [2012-11-27 17:58:17 +0000 UTC]

>Whaaat? They delete submitted explicit artworks here?? Then what's the point of adding the mature content option when submitting an artwork?? It's still art, nontheless.
.______.

Exactly that's what I thought too. *nods*
True. I find it odd that DA doesn't mind people uploading those humangous tits girl or gay smex you can see clearly their male sexual organs. *snorts*

>Sidenote: screw the bashers. They're not worth the attention. *pats shoulder*

Indeed. They are just TRUE fangirl who can't see male characters more than their good appearance. *rolls eyes*
Thanks so much. *hugs*

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patzy28 In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-27 22:44:47 +0000 UTC]

Anyways....we'll see if they'll try to delete it when I finish the whole thing. I'd probably just make another one but non-explicit.

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Gigicerisier In reply to patzy28 [2012-11-28 09:46:19 +0000 UTC]

>Anyways....we'll see if they'll try to delete it when I finish the whole thing. I'd probably just make another one but non-explicit.

Well you can draw two versions and just give us a link for the explicit SasoSaku. *heart*
(That's what I usually do when I wanna do explicit SasoSaku pics. *wide grin*)

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WorstPlayer In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-27 17:02:31 +0000 UTC]

Jaja, I like Claymore, warrior girls with nice body are always welcome.
Let's see your work...

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-27 17:07:29 +0000 UTC]

>Jaja, I like Claymore, warrior girls with nice body are always welcome.
Let's see your work...

True, true. It always amazed me how the manga manage to make smexy without making any hentai atmosphere. I mean most of time they're half naked. *chuckles*

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WorstPlayer In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-27 17:39:44 +0000 UTC]

I watched the Claymore anime, because I didn't like the drawing style of the manga (I find the faces ugly). In the anime, the colorists did an excellent work, and Clare looks super "smexy" (didn't know that word).

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-27 17:53:59 +0000 UTC]

>I watched the Claymore anime, because I didn't like the drawing style of the manga (I find the faces ugly). In the anime, the colorists did an excellent work, and Clare looks super "smexy" (didn't know that word).

Oh did you?
True, true.
but I still prefer the manga. The plot is much better at least. (No offence but I don't like Raki much)
I like Clare but not much more than other Claymore characters. (I saw someone was using the word and started using it cos I just liked the sound.)

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WorstPlayer In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-27 18:18:51 +0000 UTC]

I not only don't like Raki, I FUCKING HATE THAT KID! (I'm sorry, I just exploded in rage). And yeah, the manga plot is better, that's what I think after watching the end of the anime (I never expected such a fail).
Many people say that Galatea is the most sexy claymore, but speaking about them as characters, for me the most awesome is Priscilla.

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-27 18:24:57 +0000 UTC]

>I not only don't like Raki, I FUCKING HATE THAT KID! (I'm sorry, I just exploded in rage). And yeah, the manga plot is better, that's what I think after watching the end of the anime (I never expected such a fail).
Many people say that Galatea is the most sexy claymore, but speaking about them as characters, for me the most awesome is Priscilla.

Oho, it's very delighted to meet you. *highfive*
(No, don't worry about it. Feel free to so. *smirks*)
(Yeah it was terrible. *nods with a sigh*)
Well Galatea is smexy but really I find all of Claymores are smexy.
My favourite is Miria and Ophelia. (GalaMiri is my favourite well OTP coupling in Claymore next to CidMiria)
Seriously? It's very nice to meet someone who loves Priscilla. *wide grin*

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WorstPlayer In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-27 18:42:03 +0000 UTC]

In my room I have a pic of Clare and other of Ophelia. The name of my dog is Ophelia, and if I had a daughter, her name would be Priscilla.
Jeje, never talked with someone about Claymore since 2008, was a long wait.
And, some claymores have that thing that in the real world we call "inner beauty" (belleza interior), wich makes Undine smexy like Galatea. Oh, and I forgot about Flora, I wanted to punch the screen when Rigardo killed her in such an easy way.

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-27 18:56:34 +0000 UTC]

>In my room I have a pic of Clare and other of Ophelia. The name of my dog is Ophelia, and if I had a daughter, her name would be Priscilla.
Jeje, never talked with someone about Claymore since 2008, was a long wait.
And, some claymores have that thing that in the real world we call "inner beauty" (belleza interior), wich makes Undine smexy like Galatea. Oh, and I forgot about Flora, I wanted to punch the screen when Rigardo killed her in such an easy way.

Seriously? That sounds splended. *wide grin*
Did you draw it?
I used to have venus fly trap called Ophie and I loved her a lot but she was killed. *sighs*
Oho, I bet she's quite nasty one? *chuckles*
Yeah you should.
Actually I haven't talked about the manga either for quite a while either.
True, true. *nods*
Aw~ Flora, my another favourite claymore. Yeah it was horrible. *sighs*

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WorstPlayer In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-27 19:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Nah, I didn't, I've only copied two Clare screenshots and drew a Phyrexian Claymore. The ones on my walls are from the internet.
OnO Who killed Ophie? Another plant called Clare? OnO
My dog is far from what Ophelia is in the anime. My Ophelia is a beagle, she never barks, and only thinks on food (she eats dog food, snails and everything the little kids give to her, and after the dog food she has some kind of mental attack and starts her mad cruzade for more food).
I think Flora has a powerful hentai potential, but I'm not able for drawing her, I always have problems with the faces, I'm not a good copyist.

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-28 09:54:53 +0000 UTC]

>Nah, I didn't, I've only copied two Clare screenshots and drew a Phyrexian Claymore. The ones on my walls are from the internet.
OnO Who killed Ophie? Another plant called Clare? OnO
My dog is far from what Ophelia is in the anime. My Ophelia is a beagle, she never barks, and only thinks on food (she eats dog food, snails and everything the little kids give to her, and after the dog food she has some kind of mental attack and starts her mad cruzade for more food).
I think Flora has a powerful hentai potential, but I'm not able for drawing her, I always have problems with the faces, I'm not a good copyist.

No really. I was on holiday. *sheepish grin*
Your dog eats snails? How peculiar. *blinks*
Mental attack? Should I be surprised? *chuckles*
Well GalaMiriFlora is my favourite threesome. *shifts eyes*

I wonder by the way, can you tell me why you don't like Naruto? Is it because of Sakura like most people say? *sheepish grin*

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WorstPlayer In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-28 15:59:58 +0000 UTC]

Well, I can, but don't feel offended. I can make you a list of the things I don't like:
-The characters are too colorful for being ninjas. Under that logic, SEALs and Spetznaz should dress like the Emperor's Children (pink and golden, with spikes, chains and other extravagant things).
-The "jutsus" may look expectacular sometimes, but the fact is that they are quite weak compared with the powers of the characters of similar series, like most of the characters of Dragon Ball Z and GT. In more simple words, those powers look good, but they are not THAT powerful. I can go further and tell you that, even if Naruto and his friends have fought against monsters, no one of them could defeat (and with "deafeat" I mean to kill) most of the Evangelion angels with their current powers, and that's even more impossible if you put them in front of the angels that gave problems to the pilots when they were experienced, and that's because Naruto characters are quite weak and only made to look "good" (yes, I know that comparing angels with Naruto's enemies is unfair, but I had to secure the point).
-The clothes, the coloring, the jutsus, everything over exploits the aesthetics and makes it look childish. I love colors, because I consider myself a colorist (and sometimes a designer), but again, Naruto is too colorful and bright for being a show about ninjas, and why is it childish? because that's a resouce of infantile animation. Whith that, the people who make the series are telling a lie to the kids and denying them to know the historical truth about those honorless assassins that had none of the positive values that the show tries to teach, like when mass media show pirates like funny guys with epic adventures, when they were not, or princesses in a super clean and perfect world, when the truth was other. Sorry if that makes you feel offended, but, despite I don't like Chilean history, I feel in love with universal history, mostly military history, and knowing that a lot of people call Naruto "a ninja", makes me feel sick.
-In most series and videogames, I like when there are a lot of different characters, and Naruto wins a cookie with that point, but there is a problem with that: Have you seen some K-Pop bands? Despite if we may like them or not, sometimes they have too many integrants, some of them just don't sing in some songs, only dance. That happens when you have too many characters, most of them won't be enough deep, and you may like them because they have good looking powers, or because they are sexy and you feel in love with them, or even have sexual desire for them. That's a common problem in similar series, even in Claymore we don't even know Flora's story or if she likes Coca Cola or Pepsi, people like her because she has a cool power and because she is gorgeous (I don't know if in the manga she is a deeper character). That's why I like some sports animes, mecha and drama, because people can actually like the character beyond the hotness fact or the powers he/she may have.
-Sometimes the show tries to be violent, but the aesthetic and the context just don't let it be.
-I don't emphatize with the feelings and goals of the characters, but that's a personal thing.
-And, I like most of the Naruto chicks, even Sakura, I find pink hair is hot. Inno from Shippuden should be Miss Naruto's World. The only characters I forgive for dressing and acting like they do, are Sakura, Inno from Shippuden, and... well, only they, because they don't need to be "ninjas", they could be in fighting games and in 3D hentai doing hot stuff.

That's it, quite long explanation, I'm sorry if you had to read too much, but I guess this answers your question ^_^

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-29 11:15:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh by the way have you heard of a film called Attack the Block? *wide grin*
It's my favourite horror(well kinda) film other than Hot Fuzz. (I don't really like horror films though)

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WorstPlayer In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-29 14:37:33 +0000 UTC]

I don't like horror movies unless they are ultra violent. Most of the time I just watch the violent escenes, because I don't have enought patience for watching the whole film. And besides, I preffer animation than live action movies, because I don't like actors, only voice actors. The explanation for this is kinda weird: In words of I girl I liked when I was a "pendejo" (despective Chilean word for a little kid, or sometimes for a boy/girl below the age of who says the word. Don't confuse with the Mexican pendejo): "The actors are liars, they are false, the anime characters live in their world, in their world thing are real for them, they don't lie".

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-29 15:04:17 +0000 UTC]

Ignore the another one I sent earlier. *sheepish grin*

>I don't like horror movies unless they are ultra violent. Most of the time I just watch the violent escenes, because I don't have enought patience for watching the whole film. And besides, I preffer animation than live action movies, because I don't like actors, only voice actors. The explanation for this is kinda weird: In words of I girl I liked when I was a "pendejo" (despective Chilean word for a little kid, or sometimes for a boy/girl below the age of who says the word. Don't confuse with the Mexican pendejo): "The actors are liars, they are false, the anime characters live in their world, in their world thing are real for them, they don't lie".

Well I personally I love Attack the Block cos the characters are realistic in my opinion. It's directed by British comic actor.
I'll give you the link for the film. You might like it.
[link]

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WorstPlayer In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-29 15:44:34 +0000 UTC]

If I catch it while doing zapping at night, maybe I will watch it. Right now I'm working on my new ID picture while listening to Kagamine Rin. Things are clear in my mind, so, I resume my work.

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-29 16:16:28 +0000 UTC]

>If I catch it while doing zapping at night, maybe I will watch it. Right now I'm working on my new ID picture while listening to Kagamine Rin. Things are clear in my mind, so, I resume my work.

Oh I see. Well good luck for your pic. *wide grin*
Kagamine? *blnks*
I haven't got any idea what it is. *sheepish grin*

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WorstPlayer In reply to Gigicerisier [2012-11-29 18:09:37 +0000 UTC]

The picture is almost done.
Rin Kagamine is my favorite Vocaloid (those characters are the future of the music industry). If you want to know her, browse my favorites, I have a folder for her.

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-29 18:26:27 +0000 UTC]

>The picture is almost done.
Rin Kagamine is my favorite Vocaloid (those characters are the future of the music industry). If you want to know her, browse my favorites, I have a folder for her.

I see.
Thanks. I might check out your fav gallery later.

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-29 14:57:39 +0000 UTC]

>I don't like horror movies unless they are ultra violent. Most of the time I just watch the violent escenes, because I don't have enought patience for watching the whole film. And besides, I preffer animation than live action movies, because I don't like actors, only voice actors. The explanation for this is kinda weird: In words of I girl I liked when I was a "pendejo" (despective Chilean word for a little kid, or sometimes for a boy/girl below the age of who says the word. Don't confuse with the Mexican pendejo): "The actors are liars, they are false, the anime characters live in their world, in their world thing are real for them, they don't lie".

Ah. I see.
Well personally I love Attack the Block cos characters are quite reastic in the film. It's directed by British comic actor.
I'll give you the link for the film. You might be still intersted.
[link]

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Gigicerisier In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-29 01:39:14 +0000 UTC]

.....
Blimey, that's a lot. I don't mind though.
I'll send you a note for this later instead. *sheepish grin*

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patzy28 In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-26 15:11:29 +0000 UTC]

Lol! I guess I'd be needing some help when I do try to create some hentai-related stuff, you'd be the first to know

About the picture, actually I intentionally cropped the lowerpart coz I haven't really finished it yet. Just giving some boost for this couple.

Thanks for the ideas, it's very much appreciated and I'll take note of it I'd probably have it in a none-cute-yet-romantic ambience/setting. I wanted it to be a matured type without making it overly explicit.

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WorstPlayer In reply to patzy28 [2012-11-26 15:48:16 +0000 UTC]

If you need advice, send me a note and I will answer as soon as possible.

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patzy28 In reply to WorstPlayer [2012-11-26 15:59:12 +0000 UTC]

copy that! Thanks

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