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paulscha — Running Between Mirrors
Published: 2003-12-27 01:37:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 841; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 95
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You'll see me in the moviesAnd when you do
The face up on the screen
Will be looking right through you
Sianara and so long
Have a nice life and all that
Keep your smirk
I gotta smile
Like the canary
Who ate the cat
What about love?
I'd ask if you have any
But I know
You'll just tell me to go fish
I lost you somewhere
Between 'I will' and 'I wish'
I think you're just a will of the wisp
Running between mirrors
Kept from running dry
By stealing tears
That you're not man enough to cry
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Comments: 10
holy freakin hell Paul.......*shocked* I sooooo loved this...the ending was espeially powerful. my gawd.... 
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The ebb and flow and flow and ebb of this poem is surprisingly positive, despite the wording. It doesn't even quite seem like you're mad or upset when writing this. It almost seems like you've accepted and be done with.
In fact, it's almost sensual how the poetry tells someone to fuck off, while still remaining happy and fluffy. Almost like a rain cloud. Still fluffy but so full of hate!
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I like what you say here. This weird mix of playful and pottymouthed seems to be a paulscha trademark.
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this is nice though. a nice in dept piece, i like the words, just a nice form. great work!
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This is so immediately clever. It's sad, but playfully sad. It's been a long time since I read poetry that was so directed and yet, at the same time, not so serious or dark. What a place to be stuck, between the will and the wish. Find a star, find another star, find a shooting star. Tomorrow is a new sky.
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HOLY CRAP that's good. No, not good. GREAT!
An instant fave.
Lufft'ya!
-Dusty
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I like it a lot. Its nice to post stuff that everyone cant comment like mad on about the situation huh?
And not to be dorky...but its *sayonara. I only know that cus i take japanese.
Nice work paul.
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that was beautiful and wonderfully written, I loved it
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*hugs*
that poem...it works for me and my life and my love right now.
i love you, paul.
SEE YOU TOMORROW! (eep! how exciting is that!!)
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