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Published: 2008-07-21 00:07:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 360; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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I remember you
crawled into my bed at night
even though
you were supposed to be on the floor.

Wrapped your arms around me
I turned around
and put my hand
where your heart was.

We were flawed.
It made us perfect.

It's midnight.
I'm at the beach.
The round bright moon creates white ripples
on the cold, foamless sea water.
My feet are enveloped in ice and thick, floating sand.
The black sky is carelessly splattered with stars.

I remember, we were here.
You were there.

A mass of flesh and bone.
I had on your jacket
even though it wasn't cold.

It is now.








Comments: 9

HannahKanime [2011-01-06 18:32:59 +0000 UTC]

It kinda reminded me of the Titanic, just after it sank, Dunno why tho.
That was really good.

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DaasEriador [2008-08-02 00:12:57 +0000 UTC]

man, that's powerful.
the last two lines, especially.
keep writing, dude.

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Ninva [2008-07-22 00:10:00 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Good job. (:

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xRavaging [2008-07-21 15:51:39 +0000 UTC]

No, don't delete this. This is beautiful!

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sayhayleyy [2008-07-21 04:14:58 +0000 UTC]

oh wow, i really love this :]

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ShadedSorrow [2008-07-21 01:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Don't delete it! I love it!

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Pawed In reply to ShadedSorrow [2008-07-21 02:31:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
I was worried it sounded weird.

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CoCa84 [2008-07-21 00:08:35 +0000 UTC]

don't delete it. it's fantastic. kudos.

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Pawed In reply to CoCa84 [2008-07-21 02:32:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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