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peatrieandzook — Painful Merry-Go_round
Published: 2006-04-21 01:31:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Painful Merry-Go-Round

You hear my crying,
but you don't listen to my pain.

You see me hurting,
but you continue to ignore it,
doing nothing to ease the pain you caused.

Why do i go on this merry-go-round with you?
I cry, you turn away,
I stand and wait,
you stand and ignore me.
Why do i want you,
when you don't want me,
When will i tire of you,
when will you finally tire of me?
When does the merry-go-round stop?
How do i say i want off?
When do i say it,
when i'm dead?
Comments: 5

Invader-Candie [2006-04-21 01:34:09 +0000 UTC]

I remeber seeing this at skool YAY ME AND MY MEMORY OF DOOM!

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peatrieandzook In reply to Invader-Candie [2006-04-21 01:40:49 +0000 UTC]

Soooo... whatcha think? I don't remember what ya said the first time!

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Invader-Candie In reply to peatrieandzook [2006-04-21 01:46:01 +0000 UTC]

I think its very expressive and a great peice of poetry even if it is sort of sad, and you don't strike me as a sad person. Still, its very well composed

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peatrieandzook In reply to Invader-Candie [2006-04-21 02:00:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh Hugs!!:hugs: Snif snif, I all then sudden feel like crying with joy!!!

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Invader-Candie In reply to peatrieandzook [2006-04-21 04:30:28 +0000 UTC]

Yay for happy cry!

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