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EDIT: OMG SHE LIKES IT!! SHE. LIKES. EEEEETTTT!!! OH MY... This is bad... I know that I'm busy with school but I can't keep myself from trying to digitalize this comic. FFFFFFF Now what? (Is still trying to control self)_______________________________________________
Alternate Title: Sweet and Fluffy comic
Here's the fan fiction . (Pretty short but meh, it's still awesome.
READ HER FAN FICTIONS . THEY'RE AWESOME. Mostly KH and DP though... And I've only read her KH ones... lllorz
Yes, I drew a comic, JUST FOR HER.
She gave me 5 points in which I was too surprised and too happy to receive. LOL I only told her nice comments on her KH fanfics, I never expected anything in return. 8'D She deserved them too.
So I thank her with this.
It's a WIP because I could see plenty of mistakes here. I'll turn this thingy into digital art, but I'm not sure when. Here are the mistakes I see.
- Anatomy changes in almost every panel.
- Shading and lighting (Too much of orange. They look like they're in front of a sunset, or maybe a burning house...
- Xion's facial features change a lot due to rushing the inking... lllorz (I thought I could finish this before 2012 started...)
- Backgrounds suck.
- Marshmallows are changing sizes within each panel they were shown. Also colorful. (Why would Riku buy multicolored ones when he can buy white ones? I only realized this after I've fully colored the first panel... SOB)
- The panels are placed wrong. (In my opinion...)
- I think "bounced in her seat" doesn't mean "standing up"... (Yep, I also realized this after I was done with the inking...)
- Xion's holding the treat on her left hand then it suddenly moves to her right one. (Ugh...)
Riku smiles at the second-to-the-last panel. This, and the nod weren't in the fanfic, but it wouldn't hurt placing them...right?
Art © Me.
Riku, Xion © Kingdom Hearts, SQUARE ENIX, Disney, Tetsuya Nomura.
Sweet and Fluffy © .
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