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Published: 2012-01-03 16:07:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 2811; Favourites: 89; Downloads: 0
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EDIT: OMG SHE LIKES IT!! SHE. LIKES. EEEEETTTT!!! OH MY... This is bad... I know that I'm busy with school but I can't keep myself from trying to digitalize this comic. FFFFFFF Now what? (Is still trying to control self)_______________________________________________
Alternate Title: Sweet and Fluffy comic
Here's the fan fiction . (Pretty short but meh, it's still awesome.
)READ HER FAN FICTIONS . THEY'RE AWESOME. Mostly KH and DP though... And I've only read her KH ones... lllorz
Yes, I drew a comic, JUST FOR HER.
She gave me 5 points in which I was too surprised and too happy to receive. LOL I only told her nice comments on her KH fanfics, I never expected anything in return. 8'D She deserved them too.
So I thank her with this.
It's a WIP because I could see plenty of mistakes here. I'll turn this thingy into digital art, but I'm not sure when. Here are the mistakes I see.
- Anatomy changes in almost every panel.
- Shading and lighting (Too much of orange. They look like they're in front of a sunset, or maybe a burning house...
)- Xion's facial features change a lot due to rushing the inking... lllorz (I thought I could finish this before 2012 started...)
- Backgrounds suck.
- Marshmallows are changing sizes within each panel they were shown. Also colorful. (Why would Riku buy multicolored ones when he can buy white ones? I only realized this after I've fully colored the first panel... SOB)
- The panels are placed wrong. (In my opinion...)
- I think "bounced in her seat" doesn't mean "standing up"... (Yep, I also realized this after I was done with the inking...)
- Xion's holding the treat on her left hand then it suddenly moves to her right one. (Ugh...)
Riku smiles at the second-to-the-last panel. This, and the nod weren't in the fanfic, but it wouldn't hurt placing them...right?
Art © Me.
Riku, Xion © Kingdom Hearts, SQUARE ENIX, Disney, Tetsuya Nomura.
Sweet and Fluffy © .
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Comments: 54
Nice to still see Rion getting some love. 
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Ahahaha thank you. 8D
I've always loved the couple. I just wish I could do more... QuQ
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Thank you very much! QuQ
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Weeeeeell, I hate marshmallows XD they're killing my brain of sweetness *shrug* but the idea is still cute
Maybe you find a better way of ordering the panels when you on digitalizing it x3 But besides of that, I'm looking forward to it :3
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Ahaha I see. xD I agree with you on that, but I like marshmallows, nevertheless. 8D And true, the idea's cute. LOL
Eh? I see... Is there something wrong with my paneling? Ahaha I have no idea how to do the panels right... lllorz But thanks a lot for the critique. Appreciated. <3
Oh and, I already drew the line art for the panels but, I think I'll change some things.
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Well, they're too sweet for me
hmm I for myself have problems with paneling and I try to fix them as good as possible...
The most important thing is to think about the audience! Can those people follow the speech bubbles and the acting without problems or reading it twice? O.O Everything needs to be as simple as possible in understanding! Maybe this little hint helps you as it helped me before
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Ahhhhhh, glad there is no Roxas or Axel to disturb them, come on let's give them some privacy XD.
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Wahaha I couldn't agree more. xD GAH if only they had more time together in the game... Q_Q
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Oooh, you should draw the next one where they kiss each other.
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Di pala mahusay sa traditional ah, eh ano tawag mo dito?
Para sa'kin tingin ko mas maganda na siya na traditional, wag mo na'ng i-digi-art. Kase tamang-tama na 'yung texture eh, warm tapos yung roughness nakatulong para madaling maramdaman 'yung ambience
Isa ka na sa pinaka-humble na nakilala ko.
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Ahahaha epic fail traditional art po. LOL *shot*
Oh ganun ho? Ay, kaso parang marami po kasing mali eh... Plano ko pong i-digitalize para masmagandang tignan... 8']
Eh? Hindi po ako humble, totoo lang po yung sinasabi ko. xD
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Siguro 'yung sa sweets 'yung sinasabi mo, mas mukhang masarap kung digitally colored kase. Pano naging epic fail e nasa faves ko nga
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Waahhh, that coming from you is an honor... 8'D
Thank you so much!!
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awww, that was so adorable owo you really outdid youself this time!
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Ahahaha you think so? xDD
Thank you! 8'D
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oh nice one i like this aww X333
sweet and fluffy <33xion
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Wow thank you so much!! 8'D
Ahahaha ikr? Xion loves her marshmallows...
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THANK YOU!! ALL SHADES OF THANK YOU!!
When I got your note I sat in my chair for a moment trying to process the words you wrote. And then I clicked the link you gave.
This is such a pleasant surprise. You really didn't have to do this. Your comments are so wonderful by themselves and this ... this is just ... I can't even find the right adjective to express how this comic makes me feel. I'm just so happy that you liked "Sweet & Fluffy" so much to make this comic. I'm sorry to hear that you lost the draft for "Are You Listening?", but this comic is great all on its own--faults and all.
And the smile and nod are nice additions, though you're right about the color of the marshmallows. Riku isn't the type to get colored marshmallow. Xion on the other hand would definitely spring for some variety, maybe even get the caramel & vanilla flavored ones while she's at it.
You're an absolute sweetheart. Even though this is just a WIP, I'm still going to 
Again, thank you so much for this comic. You really brightened up my day. (No, seriously. It was all cloudy this morning, but the sun came out the moment I saw this comic.)
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OMGOMGOMG You actually like it?! OMGOMGOMG You're very welcome!! 8'D
Oh I'm so glad you appreciate this comic. And I thought you won't like it since there are plenty of mistakes throughout the comic and they are very disturbing for me to look at... After reading your comment, I felt like I just accomplished a huge mission in my life and started liking the comic despite the mistakes...
Think of this as an, attention grabber. I made this just for you, and for attracting people to read your fanfics. ^^ I will also try my best to make Xion look attractive, hopefully to lessen her haters too. I really love your fanfics and they lacked so much attention that I couldn't help myself but do this kind of thing. 8'D And the draft could be drawn again with no problems. I forgot to tell you that I only drew the last part of the fanfic, from Xion telling Riku how she was scared of knowing the answer to her question, until the last scene.
I'm glad those additions were okay. I was scared they were OOC for a bit... I just hope I noticed the colors earlier though...
Nah, I only turned it into a comic. You were the one who actually gave the effort of creating the scene so you did most of the part. xD And thank you very much for that. I plan to turn the others too into comics.
Sorry for the late reply... I left this message hanging around my inbox for awhile 'cause I was thinking of the right words to tell you besides the usual, "You're welcome" and "Thank you". lllorz But alas, all I can say is you're very welcome and thank you very much for creating the fanfic and for liking the comic version I made, again. (Dang what a large wall of text... Sorry again...)
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Even if there are some mistakes, it's really lovely
I love their expression, especially Xion, she's so cute >w<
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Waahh thank you so much... 8'D I really appreciate your feelings for this comic...
Yes, she's cute indeed. xD It almost makes me think about why some KH fans hate her... lllorz
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You're welcome~ ; v ;
Yeah, it's hard to understand people's mind about their opinion on a character :/
But personnally, I like her
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^u^
Ahahaha I agree. xD
Woot! Same here! *raises hand* LOL
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I LOVE THAT FANFICTION!!!
And wow. This is a great rendering of it, even if you think it has problems. There's not enough of this pairing on here, so something like this is awesome just for existing.^^
It's so cute, I fav'd it right away.
<3
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YAY!! Another fan of Sakura-Scout!! \(>//u//<)/
Oh thank you so much for your appreciation... 8'D And I must agree on that. We fans should make more RikuXion-related art! And I'm not referring only to fan art, but to fan fictions too. <3
OMG Really? I thank you again for that...
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Yes, I absolutely agree. I'm (insanely) working on a 100-drabble/100-picture challenge with Riku and Xion right now... Mostly because I love them, but also in part because there's not enough of them yet.^^
After that, there's this plot bunny in the back of my mind that wants me to write a full-length story with em. But I'm fending it off right now for lack of time.
And you're most certainly welcome. I can't wait to see whatever your final version of this looks like.
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So adorable!
I love the way you draw Xion! 
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Eh? OMG thank you so much!! 8'D
And I really appreciate that you like her expressions... It was all thanks to the fanfic writer, ~Sakura-Scout , that I was able to draw her like that. ^^
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