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AbelZero1 [2015-02-13 00:08:33 +0000 UTC]

Nice work ^^

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Shi-Yin [2014-08-02 00:33:40 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if this can count as a proper critique but here we go

First of all, I enjoy how playful this drawing looks.  The candies and the outfit fit the atmosphere as well as the colors.  I also enjoy how bold the lines are (but that's more of a personal preference XD).
I would say that your proportions and perspective of the body need work.  The head looks a bit big in comparison to the body, even if you're going for a 'loli' style.  Also, her chest--or more specifically her breasts,  look like they're squished together instead of two individual breasts. Try looking up reference, it's really helpful!  And I know that this is a pretty common pose so it shouldn't be too much of a problem to find a picture that looks more or less the same.  If not, taking a picture of yourself posing like that is always an alternative.  But judging from your gallery, it looks like you're on your way to becoming a great artist.  Keep it up!

I hope that this can help you and that I wasn't too harsh.  I wasn't planning on making this a full critique since I don't really like ranking artwork, haha. Good Luck and good job :]

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Chartokai [2014-04-17 15:45:31 +0000 UTC]

Very cute indeed, keep it up! ( ^ - ^ )

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