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Published: 2005-10-26 00:41:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 116; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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In the embrace of darkness. You covered youself init so completely, and yet from that moment you
were my burst of sunlight. Such incredible warmth,
or perhaps thats just the heat my own body is
portraying. My emotions are vibrating. Its so perfect
but it could never be right. Words spilling from our
mouths, thoughts in which we fully relate. In these
words I am only displaying my incompetence.
Does it matter? We arent even paying attention
to what we are saying, as these whispers evaporate
into the night; fogging my downcast eyes. Everything
of importance I am slowly etching into your
flesh. Feeling your essence pulse. Memories of others
so far away, was it through pain that we
both reached for each other? First holding, healing,
and then through liquid caresses.
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Comments: 20
Lovespoon [2006-07-10 03:55:33 +0000 UTC]
Great metaphors in this liquid caresses, whispers evaporating, emotions vibrating and burst of light.
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Perfect-Defect In reply to Lovespoon [2006-07-15 01:52:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! It is definitely one of my favourite pieces.
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nathanflint5 In reply to Perfect-Defect [2005-12-04 23:27:28 +0000 UTC]
wow bout time u came on here
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Perfect-Defect In reply to nathanflint5 [2005-12-05 20:24:06 +0000 UTC]
me? yeah... havent gone online a lot lately. but not as though youre one to talk hun.
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nathanflint5 In reply to Perfect-Defect [2005-12-05 20:27:34 +0000 UTC]
Lol just because I didnt come online for a year (actually only 11 months but..) doesnt mean anything.
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Perfect-Defect In reply to nathanflint5 [2005-12-05 20:41:27 +0000 UTC]
haha! woah. the most Ive ever been gone is like.. 11 days
it will all be okay hun. you know we all love you.
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TSHansen [2005-11-23 01:15:33 +0000 UTC]
Emotions vibrating , essence pulsing. Its reminds me almost like two instruments being tuned together, so that there simpathyic vibrations re-enforce eachother into beautiful sounds. I enjoy your metaphors.
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Perfect-Defect In reply to TSHansen [2005-11-24 20:28:50 +0000 UTC]
mmm I like how you think. thank you very much for that uplifting comment!
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Sugar-FreeHolocaust [2005-10-27 21:45:20 +0000 UTC]
Great poem, as usual. Love it to pieces I like poems like this - where they express deep human emotion like it's nothing and everything all at once.
And of course a dash of your talent goes a long way.
love the picture. Where'd you get it?!
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Perfect-Defect In reply to Sugar-FreeHolocaust [2005-10-29 15:51:01 +0000 UTC]
thanks kayla. means alot. glad you enjoy it. that picture is of the girl I wrote the poem for. Remember? Her name is Tasha.
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Sugar-FreeHolocaust In reply to Perfect-Defect [2005-10-29 16:35:55 +0000 UTC]
Wow!!! You never told me that was her...~~
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Perfect-Defect In reply to Sugar-FreeHolocaust [2005-10-29 17:24:43 +0000 UTC]
*shrugs* well.. thats her.
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sporkmcgee [2005-10-26 20:25:11 +0000 UTC]
the liquid one! this is REALLY awesome, Dani
nice pic, too
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Perfect-Defect In reply to sporkmcgee [2005-10-27 01:31:25 +0000 UTC]
haha! that it is oli! glad you enjoyed
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