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Perfect-Defect β€” Subliminal Treason
Published: 2005-08-14 20:36:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 232; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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Description When the wounds no longer bleed
Succumb to liabilityΒ Β 
Too soon the dusk engulfs the day
Temporary passion fades
This is the inspiration that I need

When the demons fail to sleep
It is my heart you crave to feast
Upon, but I wont let you choke
Clutch the truth, it scrapes your throat
Can you bear to digest the misery?
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Comments: 25

HectateNemesis [2005-10-22 17:21:28 +0000 UTC]

did you win?

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ireadthecheese [2005-08-19 08:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, I's be happy to perform yer song

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Perfect-Defect In reply to ireadthecheese [2005-08-19 23:22:30 +0000 UTC]

aww! thank you baby!

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ireadthecheese In reply to Perfect-Defect [2005-08-20 03:52:49 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, do you reallize just how happy that makes me?

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Perfect-Defect In reply to ireadthecheese [2005-08-20 15:44:54 +0000 UTC]

hmmm... no, but Id love to spend some time with you finding out

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gothic-kitten [2005-08-15 02:36:25 +0000 UTC]

*pounce* Kitty thinks it's very good. Dani show have a good chance at winning But no matter what place it's good in my book^^ Fav

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Perfect-Defect In reply to gothic-kitten [2005-08-15 02:54:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks hun! Im so glad youre back! I missed you!

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gothic-kitten In reply to Perfect-Defect [2005-08-15 04:11:19 +0000 UTC]

*pounce* Very muched missed Danish It just wasn't very fun with out ya.

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Perfect-Defect In reply to gothic-kitten [2005-08-15 20:52:09 +0000 UTC]

aww! *tear* I wish I could somehow sneak you to TB with me

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gothic-kitten In reply to Perfect-Defect [2005-08-15 20:58:44 +0000 UTC]

I don't think that would work. My dad would notice my absents...

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shadowofeternity [2005-08-15 01:26:11 +0000 UTC]

this is a great poem. but...im sorry to say that poetry.com is a scam. before you know it...they'll start asking you to pay for plaques and books (supposedly) with you poems on them. >_< i know a couple people who did it and....eh. its a scam.

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Perfect-Defect In reply to shadowofeternity [2005-08-15 01:29:29 +0000 UTC]

aww.. well.. I read the fine print.. and it seemed to make a point of stating that we didnt have to buy the books IF our poetry was published in them, and that the medals we won (no mention of plaques) were awarded... thanks for the compliment on the poem though

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shadowofeternity In reply to Perfect-Defect [2005-08-15 01:35:57 +0000 UTC]

np you should submit it in dA contests...

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Perfect-Defect In reply to shadowofeternity [2005-08-15 01:44:03 +0000 UTC]

dA has contests? o-o

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shadowofeternity In reply to Perfect-Defect [2005-08-15 15:04:20 +0000 UTC]

yeah lol. its usually with groups where if you win they give you like...free subscription and stuff. i need to try one of those ^_^

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Perfect-Defect In reply to shadowofeternity [2005-08-15 21:02:24 +0000 UTC]

awesome! oh yeah! Im in a dA contest! haha. I forgetted

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shadowofeternity In reply to Perfect-Defect [2005-08-16 00:45:12 +0000 UTC]

lol hahahaha

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Perfect-Defect In reply to shadowofeternity [2005-08-16 22:04:07 +0000 UTC]

azack socrry iff rhtere a r e spellinga smist\kws..tapowed thumanb tokn figner

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shadowofeternity In reply to Perfect-Defect [2005-08-17 01:47:44 +0000 UTC]

o.0. whoa....thats funky.

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Perfect-Defect In reply to shadowofeternity [2005-08-17 02:59:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks, I finally got it off though.

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shadowofeternity In reply to Perfect-Defect [2005-08-17 04:03:08 +0000 UTC]

lol cool.

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blinkninja [2005-08-14 23:39:37 +0000 UTC]

wow i i think this is one of your best
fav
do you hate sunsets i do?

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Perfect-Defect In reply to blinkninja [2005-08-15 01:16:09 +0000 UTC]

hate sunsets?! no! I wrote about a sunset once upon a time. yes. I think this is one of my best too! thanks for the fav!

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Sugar-FreeHolocaust [2005-08-14 20:42:46 +0000 UTC]

That's right--I forced you to like you!! XD


I told you I'd fave it

Too bad I can't fave it another 230942734 times.

Because I would, and you know I would!!!!

Next time the fan bites you, retaliate! THROW ME INTO THE FAN! XD

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Perfect-Defect In reply to Sugar-FreeHolocaust [2005-08-15 02:05:26 +0000 UTC]

haha! basically!
yes you did!
woah.. thats a big number
and yeah, I know you would! haha!
uhh. no?! *clings*

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