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Published: 2006-06-13 02:23:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 56; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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No one likes spending their nightwith their face to the asphalt
And its just a waste of time
Watching the rain clear the blood away
let me write your little IOUs
lets just pretend that this hysterical
blindess will not effect you
Think you're fucking embarassed?
Hypocritical embrace
"Leave me the fuck alone"
Thank you.
Skipping out
cut it out
Cut it all
Cut-Cut
Hack-Hack
head against the tar mat
Bang it harder
bruise me darker
This is pretty sweet don't ya think?
Red faced and disgraced
Pay the price to be replaced
"I'm not gonna make it"
"but its made of all the things I have to take"
wow thats a crazy beat
who knew
banging your head against the wall
could have such a catchy tune
"you left me no choice"
"I'm not gonna make it"
Sun hasn't even bled yet
and Im already craving a taste
this taste of fucking disrespect
"The truth be perverted"
pulse of the maggots...
this cardboard cut out of reality does nothing
when I want the void of deceit
Industry
My reddened cheeks
I want my cash in hand.
If you don't have it-
don't bother coming home at all!
Sometimes its better to have the grace of
the undistinguished
than the edge of silouette
Fly on the wall much
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Comments: 10
Perfect-Defect In reply to blinkninja [2006-06-17 19:59:27 +0000 UTC]
^^ thank you for reassuring me... you have no idea how worried I was that it was shit
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blinkninja In reply to Perfect-Defect [2006-06-24 02:27:43 +0000 UTC]
everything you wright has somthing i like about it so don't worry
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KatieBearMcLean [2006-06-13 23:36:41 +0000 UTC]
Hey babe! wow this is amazing stuff.. I love it girl! <3 miss yah like hell !
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Perfect-Defect In reply to KatieBearMcLean [2006-06-13 23:56:04 +0000 UTC]
thanks hun! ^^ miss you too, ///333333
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The-Final-Sin [2006-06-13 19:29:31 +0000 UTC]
Hey I like the:
"No one likes spending their night
with their face to the asphalt
And its just a waste of time
Watching the rain clear the blood away"
&
"Red faced and disgraced
Pay the price to be replaced"
The rest I dont follow well enough. And the quotes (I feel) take away from it. Overall its pretty cool.
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Perfect-Defect In reply to The-Final-Sin [2006-06-14 00:04:20 +0000 UTC]
thanks.. I did the first little stanza thing last week.. and the quotes.. I dont know.. usually Im listening to music and when I did Vivid Toxin I would take quotes and they would fit. I guess this is just a cheap knock off of sincere emotion?
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xwhatsernamex [2006-06-13 03:07:03 +0000 UTC]
i don't really like the last line.. poor english and kind of breaks the mood.
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Perfect-Defect In reply to xwhatsernamex [2006-06-13 23:50:12 +0000 UTC]
sorry... can't even remember the last line... I think I know which one you mean.. I was writing this in kind of blocks of time, and my then I was calmer.. and more... I don't know.. but thanks for the comment.
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