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Published: 2006-10-04 00:33:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 131; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Take a picture of a feelingCapture the essence of a smile
Pretend your wounds are slowly healing
Hold it closer for a while.
Let me show you how to flounder
Grasp the pulsing, pray you don't scream
Watch the tears stream
While the love flees
Growing hazy, mile by mile.
No reasoning behind the question.
No warmth behind the touch.
Who was that you used to long for?
You never had it, it's never lost.
Every breath, it begs for answers.
Emotions sidestepped for better cause.
Let me teach you how to do it...
god.. it hurts so much.
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Comments: 10
I love it. It flows so well. I stumbled a bit on the "pray you don't scream", but the rhythm is overall very... pulling.
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Thank you dear! I haven't gotten an actual comment of some actuall intellectual worth for quite some time!
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Carter complains that no one visits his gallery because he has no visual art.
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omg this is just so good
i'm a loss for words right now
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I think God's envious of you right now.
Maybe just for a split second.
But I know he felt envy.
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You make me cry... but I have never felt so happy as those tears roll down my cheeks and I am able to finally breathe again. 
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Very nice, I love the sound of it. "No reasoning behind the question.
No warmth behind the touch." These lines are particularily awesome.
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Thank you very much m'dear. I haven't written anything in a while- its good to know my emotions haven't begun to dry up.
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