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peterdawes — 01. letter by-nc-nd
Published: 2009-04-26 16:38:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 559; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 10
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Description dearly devoted one,
allow me to take this chance to state
that the world itself resides on a strange path
and seems tilted on a precarious angle.
i do not know how this happened
except to say that it did.

and i am sorry for it.

sometimes our hands are bloodied
before we realize we hold the knife
and at times we see the crimson stains
and merely shut our eyes to it.
i never knew i had the heart of a killer
until i saw the blade and realized
the wounds inflicted on my behalf.

i shuddered against them
but the dreams were real.
i beg your pardon, i just simply
cannot figure out what i became.

there once was a man with
ironclad resolve who said, using my voice,
that nothing would change his convictions.
he gazed into the mirror of self and
affirmed this with his dying breaths.

but as i woke to find myself
surrounded by the darkness, i realized
we all live to see our shadows
and wrestle with the monsters
buried deep inside our closets.

tempered now, the spirit speaks to you
in words you listen to with patient ears
and an understanding heart.
hope springs eternal
i smile within the sunlight,
immortal though i am, i can yet
feel its rays upon my skin and i am not burned.

consider this one more step down this path.

i saw a light on in the distance
and feel the warmth provided me despite myself.
tomorrow is another day
yesterday is a lesson learned
and today is a promise, kept wrapped
with delicate, yet determined, hands sheltering it.

life is a wonder
with renewed purpose, i face it.
hope springs eternal
and i can breathe again.

your immortal poet,
peter
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Comments: 21

Malandante [2009-05-19 07:51:59 +0000 UTC]

This is marvelous Peter

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TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-05-02 21:33:43 +0000 UTC]

It takes a strong man to admit he is wrong.

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SeaFlutter [2009-04-29 03:50:57 +0000 UTC]

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Ordogirl [2009-04-28 22:03:51 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully written. A jarring example of how horrific it is to see that we are capable of causing pain, even when would never believe it of ourselves.

btw....are you really, for real a...oh, nevermind.

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jadedcharlotte [2009-04-28 01:47:14 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written.

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EclipsedPersona [2009-04-27 18:25:13 +0000 UTC]

The world would be so much more brilliant if only 10 percent had a way with words that was as wonderful as you do... brilliant Peter!

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Eloquent-Weapon [2009-04-27 08:07:22 +0000 UTC]

You have an eloquent way with words, sir. amazing work.

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peterdawes In reply to Eloquent-Weapon [2009-04-27 14:03:48 +0000 UTC]

i am honored you think as such, friend. thank you.

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Eloquent-Weapon In reply to peterdawes [2009-04-27 18:12:37 +0000 UTC]

Youre welcome!

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Adahy [2009-04-27 05:51:37 +0000 UTC]



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peterdawes In reply to Adahy [2009-04-27 14:04:00 +0000 UTC]

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Adahy In reply to peterdawes [2009-04-27 14:05:51 +0000 UTC]

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losingmyfaith [2009-04-27 03:12:50 +0000 UTC]

well written. good job (:

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peterdawes In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-04-27 14:04:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you, dear.

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losingmyfaith In reply to peterdawes [2009-04-27 20:26:02 +0000 UTC]

most welcome (:

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Mithgariel [2009-04-26 19:55:35 +0000 UTC]

The very essence of poetry.

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peterdawes In reply to Mithgariel [2009-04-27 14:04:26 +0000 UTC]

you are too kind to me, dear.

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Mithgariel In reply to peterdawes [2009-04-27 15:23:24 +0000 UTC]

No I'm not

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AndromedaII [2009-04-26 17:33:01 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful and written so well.

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peterdawes In reply to AndromedaII [2009-04-27 14:04:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you very kindly, dear.

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AndromedaII In reply to peterdawes [2009-04-27 18:02:31 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome, Peter.

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