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Published: 2008-09-14 02:57:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 411; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 9
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Description arise, fair phoenix.
ascend into the morning light.
arise from funeral pyres and
overcome the shadows cast by
dancing flames.

rise into the sky at last.

tethered by the night,
held back by specters
as they cast your body
into the conflagration,
death awaiting you within.

they try to suffocate the waking dreamer,
but dreams were not meant to be subdued.

rise into the sky at last.

you who soar with eagles,
who dance with spirits,
and who speak with angels.
you who paint pictures to stir
the jaded into life.

the world cannot hold you hostage.
the jealous cannot tame you.

rise into the sky at last.
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Comments: 21

ErilisVampyre [2008-09-20 07:40:39 +0000 UTC]

*smile* The phoenix in its entire.

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psyconoclast [2008-09-15 19:36:22 +0000 UTC]

I like this one a great deal.

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ItsxMagik [2008-09-14 21:16:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh, Peter.
I have nothing at all to say about this except this little clapping emoticon thingy:

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peterdawes In reply to ItsxMagik [2008-09-14 21:18:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you very kindly.

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frisca-freak [2008-09-14 13:34:02 +0000 UTC]

"the world cannot hold you hostage.
the jealous cannot tame you.

rise into the sky at last."

very inspiring.

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peterdawes In reply to frisca-freak [2008-09-14 21:19:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you, dear

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AzraelDarkAngel540 [2008-09-14 08:04:39 +0000 UTC]

love the images conjured up and the overall theme

"they try to suffocate the waking dreamer,
but dreams were not meant to be subdued." The heroic couplet Those lines are what I deem immortal.

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peterdawes In reply to AzraelDarkAngel540 [2008-09-14 21:19:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you very kindly

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AzraelDarkAngel540 In reply to peterdawes [2008-09-14 21:52:45 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome my friend

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YouInventedMe [2008-09-14 07:39:18 +0000 UTC]

love that first stanza


xo!

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peterdawes In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-09-14 21:19:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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MrsDarcKnyt [2008-09-14 05:15:18 +0000 UTC]

you who soar with eagles,

Eagles ... and Falcons.



Great job on this Peter.

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peterdawes In reply to MrsDarcKnyt [2008-09-14 21:20:17 +0000 UTC]

eagles. . . falcons. . . other winged birds of prey.
thank you, lady falcon.

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MrsDarcKnyt In reply to peterdawes [2008-09-15 07:57:55 +0000 UTC]



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Guitar-Child [2008-09-14 04:14:10 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful ^_^

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peterdawes In reply to Guitar-Child [2008-09-14 04:31:35 +0000 UTC]

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Always-Wanting-More [2008-09-14 04:12:27 +0000 UTC]

perfectly sublime

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peterdawes In reply to Always-Wanting-More [2008-09-14 04:31:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you kindly

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Always-Wanting-More In reply to peterdawes [2008-09-14 05:04:58 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* you never learn

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y0urstalker [2008-09-14 03:32:55 +0000 UTC]

Arise fair sun and slay the envious moon who is already sick and pale with grief that thou her maiden art more fair than she.

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peterdawes In reply to y0urstalker [2008-09-14 03:48:27 +0000 UTC]

quite so. quite so.

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