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Published: 2009-01-04 04:26:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 608; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 5
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Description the chill of death looms heavy in the air.

a shuffle of footsteps on wet city pavement.
fresh rain, a pervasive odor in the air;
i follow you, at something of a distance
and yet, i know you can sense the shiver
running up and down your spine.

this is what i live for.
adrenaline; liquid poison,
fueling the hunt for the hunter;
fueling the cravings of the assassin.

tension builds as your back straightens,
as my lit cigarette finds its way into a gutter
swimming downstream with the other things
smart enough to know to run.
unlike you. you continue down this street with me.

fingers touch the sword’s hilt
as though a musician
warming up for the grand concerto,
preparing the next act of the opera.

something causes you to stop walking.
truth forming fissures on denial at long last?
i duck into the shadows, sword by my side
so the moon’s pale light does not cast a glow
upon the sharpened steel i caress just like a lover.

and like a lover, i seek
to offer ministrations to the passions
i serve as a willing servant;
to the inner demons which hold me captive.

you resume walking as though indifferent,
but i can smell the fear from where i’m standing
and it only grows in potency the closer i come
to you, my unfortunate target.
a dance with the devil awaits as i near you.

fear, a tempting perfume
invading my senses, nearly causing me
to pause and savor its aroma,
but better things are yet to come.

two hand closing around the sword’s hilt.
two arms raising; shoulders square, the posture
taught to me when i was yet a neophyte
elbows bent, eyes set upon you, readying myself
to deliver the fatal blow at last. waiting for one thing.

my fangs taste the wind;
my senses prepare themselves
for the scent i favor the most
filling the night air; running down the streets.

i scuff a shoe on purpose. you turn and face me.
eyes wide, no time to react. metal piercing flesh;
piercing muscle, piercing body, impaling you;
slicing through you as though you were little more
than blood being held inside a container of air.

crimson red, the assassin’s color
pouring out like rivers of
endless pleasure; endless decadence
forming pools intermixing with puddles.

you drop to your knees, looking upward
regarding the face of your killer as he flicks your blood
from his blade and smiles the devil’s smile.
no remorse, no regret, just pure satisfaction.
he bids you go to sleep and you have no choice but to obey.

another body; another soul
another notch upon an already long belt.
the killer strolls into the darkness,
his black heart all the more vile.

the chill of death passes with the blood spilled in my wake.
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Comments: 18

Malandante [2009-01-19 10:01:09 +0000 UTC]

Leaves the reader breathless. Takes them to the scene and literally feels like you are there well done Peter.

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peterdawes In reply to Malandante [2009-01-19 18:10:36 +0000 UTC]

you are too kind, love. thank you.

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Malandante In reply to peterdawes [2009-01-20 00:26:13 +0000 UTC]

I am honest. I say what I see. Your most welcome

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Obsidian-Siren [2009-01-05 20:19:11 +0000 UTC]

F L Y N N????? Need I say more. *winks*

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peterdawes In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-01-05 20:27:42 +0000 UTC]

*wicked grin* i must say, that is only one of my favorite uses for the blade.

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to peterdawes [2009-01-05 21:04:42 +0000 UTC]

Yes I know that darling, but we had an agreement....

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peterdawes In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-01-05 21:13:58 +0000 UTC]

*kisses your neck* never fear, enticing goddess, this was only a memory.
i must say, though... a little nibble sounds tempting. *grins*

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Obsidian-Siren In reply to peterdawes [2009-01-06 21:35:30 +0000 UTC]

:growls: We had a deal . . .

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peterdawes In reply to Obsidian-Siren [2009-01-06 21:50:31 +0000 UTC]

*grins and kisses you again* and i shall not break such a deal. tell me what i might do to turn that growl into a purr.

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losingmyfaith [2009-01-05 03:32:14 +0000 UTC]

I think it would be more powerful shorter, but I also think it's a great poem. It could work both long and short, so. Good job

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peterdawes In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-01-05 20:28:49 +0000 UTC]

it is narrative, so i permitted it a bit more length. i may see to making it more concise, but only if it does not disrupt the pacing.
thank you very kindly

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GraveyardSickness [2009-01-05 02:22:29 +0000 UTC]

whoa.so.awesome.....i like it...so much blood

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paintedbluerose [2009-01-04 17:53:47 +0000 UTC]

I love the "liquid posion" and "crimson red, an assassin's color" lines. Very nice. They seem to stand out more; more imagary.

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AlwAys-tRy [2009-01-04 15:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Very dark and chilling.
I love the detailed description and feeling of the piece.

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AnimadellaRosa [2009-01-04 14:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Every word has taken me along this assassin's journey.
Very riveting and powerful, Peter! Bravo!

By the way, I have a Katana sword and a few others..

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PhantomThiefVier [2009-01-04 08:56:32 +0000 UTC]

"i scuff a shoe on purpose. you turn and face me.
eyes wide, no time to react. metal piercing flesh;
piercing muscle, piercing body, impaling you;
slicing through you as though you were little more
than blood being held inside a container of air."

so vivid this sent shivers down my spine.

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ErilisVampyre [2009-01-04 06:22:13 +0000 UTC]

No, this has not been seen until now...
...and what masterpiece it is.
A brilliant movement of death, darkness and blood.

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unenchantedgirl [2009-01-04 06:17:43 +0000 UTC]

fear, a tempting perfume
invading my senses, nearly causing me
to pause and savor its aroma,
but better things are yet to come.



Wonderful.

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