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peterdawes β Tangle Me, My Reverie
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Published: 2009-12-27 09:43:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 468; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 6
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tangle me within the whispers of the eveningand hold me close within the shadow of the day.
sunset brings with it the kiss of soft remembrance,
pining for the brush of tender touches;
beckon me and steal me away.
i want to be surrounded by your essence,
feeling you inside the marrow of my bones.
i want to drift to sleep with you my final thought,
and wake with you a desperate notion,
my spirit not sated without you near.
you bolster me with words of wisdom.
you clutch my hand through tempests
wrought by human hands; you guide me
through the desert valley. when i am with you
nothing could distill these sentimentsβ¦
except to lose myself within the moments and
lose myself within the promise of tomorrow.
sentinel of my soul, my heart kept safe within
the cherished emotions exchanged,
come tangle me within your peace, my reverie.
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Now, it could be the air conditioning, but I have chills. This is pretty, and deep, the way those cherished years of love are supposed to be. I envy you the ability to write it so.
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That was absolutely beautiful I actually cried a little.
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*hands you the tissue box and grins* i am quite humbled over such a reaction. thank you for reading it.
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*Acccepts tissues and grins in return* I hope to read more just like it
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Your style reminds me a LOT of how I wrote a few years back, when I preferred a more even, streamlined form.
The second stanza captures me, and the title is just beautiful.
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thank you very kindly. my style varies here and there depending on how the wind blows. *chuckles* but this one just wished to come out this way.
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