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Laylabelle97 [2015-12-30 18:57:24 +0000 UTC]

Hi, member here. 

These thumbnails have very clean pencil lines, which I really like and really make it easy to see. The backgrounds are nicely rendered out, and you can even tell the character's expression. You have a nice variety of panels. These are supposed aliens, right? I have to say, though, on the upper fourth column, it's a little unclear what's happening. 

And in the lower set, on the 2nd page, I'm having some trouble understanding. Who's the little angry guy? Is it the creature he's trying to photograph or is it a different creature? And why does he go from being angry to sad. 
Overall, though, I have to say that you're doing a great job so far, it's expressive, slick looking, the backgrounds are great, and the character designs are distinct.

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MoMotwi [2015-12-30 14:41:15 +0000 UTC]

Hi!

Okey, I hope this doesn't make you upset, but when I look at this the first thing that comes to mind is Monsters, Inc.!! And that is a good thing, because I think the movies is great in terms of animation and character design!
And your characters look soo expressive and funny, it's amazing
Even without knowing the story line, i'm interessed because the character are well design, and it looks like they are going to have a great time!
I really like it.

The only thing I think is missing is the coloring or more shading, but I understand after all this is just a draft, also add more sound efects!!

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