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"Knock Knock!"The Knocking on her wooden door quickly caught her attention. She had been waiting for him as they had their whole afternoon planned (if you call "going to the movies" a well planned afternoon), she had summoned him to her house as they had an hour or two to kill before the movi, they would have plenty of time to hang around and chat.
—"Come in Juno!" — The girl said without leaving her work table.
—"It's locked" — replied a raspy voice, presumably belonging to Juno.
Having no other choice, she got of her chair. Her hands were dirty, muddled by the clay she used for her little sculpts, she took a nearby rag and used it to clean herself, then she cleared her sight from her flowing dark hair, which always came down before her eyes when she lowered her head to take a closer look at her art pieces.
She opened the door, letting the tanned young man in, he looked classy on his trendy clothes, while she looked like a mess in her dull, work clothes (that is, pieces she could afford to ruin and stain). They shook hands and shared a friendly embrace, as they were used to greet each other.
—"How's everything going, Elena?" — He asked politely.
Elena, not one to waste time, was on her way back to her (so called) little workshop —"I'm fine" — she said —"Who let you in?"
—"Your house maid, on her way out."
—"Oh!" —Elena exclaimed —"Then we're all alone" — she added.
—"I assume your old man is out of the country again, eh?" — Juno guessed and Elena just nodded.
—"Looky! I got something special to show you!" — she said with a little hint of excitement as she instructed Juno to come closer.
Elena put away whatever she was working on and took something from a nearby shelf, a was a small figurine. It wasn't that hard to figure what it was supposed to be, judging from juno's big grin upon seeing it.
—"Hahahahaha!" — He just could not hold his laughter —"That's me!" — He deducted as he reached for the figure.
—"No touching!" — Yelled Elena as she retired the figure from his reach, her pitch black eyes widening like a cat's in an alerted state.
Juno flinched a bit, a little confused by Elena's reaction; it wasn't like her to react in such way —"No touching?" — He asked, echoing her like a parrot.
—"Just kidding! Knock yourself out!" — She declared as she handed the figure to him with a smile on her face.
Juno felt a fierce jolt the very moment he touched the figurine, like a static discharge. Startled, he dropped the figurine, but his cat like reflexes let him catch with no damage.
—"That was a close one"— Juno sighted in relief —"The resemblance is uncanny!" — He just stared at the figure, completely awestruck.
—"How can a soft clay sculpture give you a jolt?" — It was a good question, but Juno just shrugged it off in a 'I don't know' gesture —"Please try to not smudge or deform it" — Elena instructed as she searched around her drawers.
Juno was completely fascinated, the level of detail on the doll was incredible, down to the tiniest touch; it had his manly, squared jaw, his slightly twisted nose, that little scar over his eyebrow, his worked out six-pack abs and pecs… he actually was a bit surprised to see she had sculpted his little figure shirtless (and in swimming trunks), but he was willing to let that pass since it was just too perfect, plus he had always been a little vain.
—"How long did it take you to create this figure?" — He asked as he fondly regarded his little, clay counterpart.
—"About thirty minutes" — Elena replied, further impressing Juno —"Made it out some special clay my father brought from his last trip to China or Japan," — she doubted for a moment —"Somewhere in Asia. I use one of the photos from our class' trip to the water park in which you looked perfect for modeling" — she added.
—"Yeah, about that" — Juno had found something curious while staring at a certain area in the figure —"Don't take this the wrong way, but, you, like…uhm…put a lot of detail on this bulge on the crotch" — he commented, uneasy.
Elena broke down into laughter at the mention of the figure's crotch; she let herself fall down on her bed, rolling around laughing.
—"I figured you would find that hilarious" — But he did not found it funny at all —"I mean, don't all guys wish to be 'well hung', eh?" — She asked him maliciously.
—"Well I do say…"— Juno carefully re-thought what he was going to say —"That's like saying all girls want to have a huge rack" —he replied.
—"Whatever, come on, show me a big smile!" — Elena told him, holding the digital camera she was looking for.
Juno posed along his likeness and Elena captured the image, immortalizing it for the years to come.
—"Say, do you mind if I go down stairs for a glass of water?" — Juno politely requested —"It's horribly hot outside and the walk here left me completely pooped"
—"Naturally, my home is your home" — request granted —"You don't have to ask, you know it!" — She further said in a sweet, caring manner.
Juno rushed out of the room, it was a long way down the stairs and into the kitchen, Elena's home was quite a mansion. Meanwhile, Elena had a devilish idea, they still had a lot of time to kill so she figured she could take the time to show Juno how much more "interesting" she could make his likeness look.
Elena took out the lump of leftover clay from the figure; she surely would need it, and started wondering what modifications she would do.
—"Hmmmmm" — She mumbled thoughtful, trying to choose her starting point —"Well, well, he complained about this, might as well start here" —She thought to herself as she stared at that notorious bulge on the figure's crotch.
Elena licked her thumb a bit and started gently pressing the bulge, squashing and smudging it all over the figures crotch, relocating the clay all over the area as if it was burrowing itself back into the deepest caverns of clay Juno's innards.
Meanwhile, on the kitchen, Juno was having his refreshing glass of water (his third, actually), it felt so relieving and good, he felt content until…
—"Oof" — He growled in pain, comically, as he flinched and let his glass (a plastic cup, actually) fall to the ground.
He bent over in pain, instinctively covering his manhood. Out of nowhere he felt as if someone had just punched him in the nuts, he was suffering big time! He took a deep breath and tried to ignore the pain and recover his posture.
—"What was that?" — He asked himself, confused, but before he could even speculate about it —"Son of a…!!"— Once again he felt his crotch under attack.
He felt a smashing pain down there, as if some invisible crushing force was smooshing his manhood mercilessly. Juno fell over to the ground; grunting, whimpering and finally screaming in agony —"Help!" — He screamed as loudly as he could, but Elena's room was to far away, nobody would hear him.
—"What is going on?" — Juno thought as he sank in a sea of agonizing pain and the terrifying sensation of having his privates turned into paste against his crotch.
The pain stopped a few moments later, Juno managed to get up, slowly but surely, yet, something felt off… He just had to check out damage control, no matter how ugly thing could get.
—"There!" — Elena declared triumphant —"No more bulge" — certainly, she had altered the figure, her skilled fingers had reshaped the crotch area and it was almost flat now, as if the figure was a girl (or a Ken doll) —"Now, to turn the rest of the body into a more 'tender' shape"
Elena began rubbing her thumb against the figure's abs in order to undo them; she then proceeded to use both of her hands to "roll" the torso in order to make it thinner.
Back at the kitchen, Juno was having a complete freak out, a quick inspection down south revealed the complete lack of his manhood, any trace of it was completely gone
—"Ohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrap!" — He repeated endlessly like a broken record, he was in a sort of shock, he couldn't think straight, his mind just couldn't wrap around the situation.
Juno briefly broke out of his stupor and resorted to the only idea he could think of, he had to reach Elena for help, however, before he even moved a couple of steps, he felt some weird activity on his belly. Juno untucked his shirt to check out what was going on there; he witnessed the way his perfect abs began to fade away, as if they were sinking back into his body, causing him to fall back on his butt startled.
—"thiscantbethiscantbethiscantbe" — He mumbled, there was no proper way to react to this kind of development.
He tried to get up, but everything was getting worse and worse. He felt enormous pressure on the sides, he could hear his ribs creak and his spine shifting, his waist turned more slender and his whole torso stretched up in an unreal way. It was like a fun house mirror reflection; but it was really happening to him and it was way more painful than it looked like.
—"Oh my!" — Elena sighted —"I screwed up!" — She noticed how skinny and stretched out the figure had become, as if there were two pieces of people attached by a thin pipe —"I better fix this"
Elena squashed the figure a bit and relocated the clay all over, even adding more clay to make the figure's hips bigger. What once had an athletic body, now had a slight pear shaped frame.
Juno once more tried to march towards Elena's room, but his elongated body was too wobbly, he couldn't find his center and had no balance. He was then squashed by a tremendous force, slamming him down against the ground again.
—"Oi!" — He growled as he caressed his buttocks, which felt bigger.
As he tried to get back up, he felt his hips swell, he also felt a lot sturdier than before. The rollercoaster of feelings and pain was tearing his mind apart, his confusion only got worse. A quick glance made him realize he wasn't stretched anymore, but he felt very groggy.
Juno took another deep breath and tried to go on, but his body would not have any of it. As he tried to step forward he fell face first into the ground, his legs failed him and started to hurt
.
—"This isn't right" — Elena growled a bit annoyed —"These legs are ruined now"
Elena was trying to give the figure longer legs, just like she tried with the torso, but she accidentally twisted the left leg beyond repair and the right leg was a bit too long.
Juno unleashed a painful shriek; his left leg was completely shattered, useless! He would have to crawl around to keep going, which would make the stairs a pain in the ass to climb.
—"I'll Work out the legs later," — Elena decided—"I'll work on something more amusing now" — she declared, giggling.
She took a couple of lumps of clay and slapped them into the figure's chest; she would proceed to work her magic to turn them into proper breasts.
Juno kept crawling, anyway he could, towards the stairs, completely focused on reaching his friend. A new sensation came to him, he felt his temperature rise, it was like his chest was on fire, but it wasn't painful, it even felt a bit pleasant; he felt as if something was pushing outward from inside his chest, it was kinda hard to ignore, eventually, truth hit him on the face, he had grown a pair of plump breasts.
—"ugh…just what I needed" —He growled sarcastically —"I have no time for this, I have to keep moving on" — he thought as he proceeded, even with the added weight of his heavy breasts.
Elena giggled at what she had done, it looked so funny, and it just brought a big smile to her face.
—"Well now, let's work on that ugly male mug of his" —Elena proceeded.
Elena started working on that squared jaw; it was a definite sign of manliness and had to be destroyed. She squashed it a bit and then started to turn it round (with a help of extra clay), because a round face is definitely more feminine, she thought.
The jaw of the real Juno was smashed in an outmost painful manner, he wanted to scream, but that was no longer possible, he just managed to mumble like a baby. He felt his jaw being stretched a morphed and he was helpless to the hellish torture unleashed upon him.
With no warning, Juno felt something stabbing his eyes repeatedly, followed by the crushing of his cheek bones and the smashing of his nose, he had been completely defaced.
—"Why bother?" — He asked himself again and again. He just gave up.
—"NO! NO! NO!" — Elena was furious —"This looks like crap!" — She yelled at the figure —"The only way I can do this right is starting from scratch!" — She decided.
Elena held the figure with both of her hands and she unceremoniously smashed it. All of Juno's bones turned to dust instantly, his organs squished against each other, what once was Juno now was a gross flesh colored blob wrapped on his clothes. He had to scream like never before, but he had no mouth.
Elena flattened and stretched the lump of clay, twisted and rolled it, the squashed it again and repeat. Juno's body mimicked these motions; his clothes got absorbed into the disgusting fleshy mass, words could not describe what his pain felt like.
Right there, before Elena's face, laid a big lump of clay, on her kitchen floor laid a terrifying flesh blob, crawling around aimlessly. How was he alive? Or was he? Would you call that "life"? He couldn't see, he couldn't hear, taste nor smell, he could only feel fear.
Elena took a deep breath —"Let's do this" — she said and then began working on the lump of clay, putting all her heart on it.
Elena was completely focused, like in trance; her fingers moved swiftly as if they had life of their own, she was completely inspired. She was in "the zone".
Thirty minutes or so worth of hard work, the new figure was complete, "Girl Juno" as she named it. Despite the new doll being a long haired, top heavy, pear shaped girl, there was no doubt; it was supposed to be Juno, the little touches and subtle details gave it away, anybody could see the resemblance. Elena had been nice enough to give the new doll a nice mini skirt and a short tank top, both hugged the doll's curves tightly, she felt truly proud.
—"This is going to be a riot!" — She thought, apparently not realizing her friend's trip to the kitchen had been a little too long.
It wasn't until the clay rendered a female figure that Juno became a person again; the pain had finally ended, hopefully for ever this time.
The door to Elena's room slammed open, she saw (astonished) a girly figure emerge from the other side, a girl identical to her new doll. Elena was completely shocked, she glanced over to the doll, then to the girl, there was no doubt, they were the same.
—"Ju…ju…Juno?" — Elena mumbled, scared.
The girl fell to her knees before Elena, whimpering, shaking, tears flowing thru her cheeks.
—"I…Did I…"— Elena didn't understand what was going on —"I never meant to…I will fix you!" —Elena didn't know what the hell she was talking about, she couldn't fully understand the situation, but she felt guilt.
—"NO!" — Juno screamed as hard as she could —"No more changes…No more pain…"
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Comments: 16
thisisntarealname [2024-12-31 05:46:52 +0000 UTC]
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Vert-Exis [2019-04-12 23:58:21 +0000 UTC]
Well, this has to be the first obligatory “evil gender-bender” of your stories that isn’t actually evil. It’s actually a good story – even if it was strange and bizarre – since the bad guy did not get away with his/her evildoing like in your other decidedly-sad stories… since there was no bad guy here. Just “idiots being idiots”.
Still… I think you spend a lot of details on the description of the gender-changing action; kinda’ like how writers waste an entire paragraph on explaining the action of smoking a cigar in drama stories (but that’s just my opinion). It easily gives away the “true” passions of the writer and critics could use them against him/her.
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perve123 [2014-08-22 21:09:57 +0000 UTC]
an excellent mix of horror and TG, couldn't stop reading until the end. nice one
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SamusEmblem [2011-06-21 01:22:36 +0000 UTC]
And just because of my last comment on your other story... THIS is the kind of story I LOVE reading from you This is where it's at!
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xanxus93 [2011-01-14 22:32:12 +0000 UTC]
nicely done.this is refreshingly different from most tg stories
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PrincessKooh [2010-09-19 05:58:28 +0000 UTC]
Omg that was awesome! Yay for that clay! And the possibilies are endless mwahaha
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petit-squeak In reply to PrincessKooh [2010-09-19 10:44:30 +0000 UTC]
Just don't try using it on yourself.
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PrincessKooh In reply to petit-squeak [2010-09-20 03:56:56 +0000 UTC]
Aww I was gonna make my breasts bigger and shed some weight then dish out some revenge ta people who have wronged me!
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blazikenking [2010-09-10 21:09:09 +0000 UTC]
'tis a case of body squick (look it up on tvtropes.org)
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petit-squeak In reply to blazikenking [2010-09-10 22:12:17 +0000 UTC]
Actually it's "body horror" which happens to be squicky :3
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petit-squeak In reply to blazikenking [2010-09-11 02:23:27 +0000 UTC]
hehehe, it's okay, it's just that i have had my fair share of hours in tv tropes, that random button pretends to be your friend, but it quickly makes you its slave!
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blazikenking In reply to petit-squeak [2010-09-11 14:44:43 +0000 UTC]
just one page can enslave you. you read it, see something interesting, open it in another tab, see something else, open it in another tab, and it just multiplies to lots of tabs
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SamusEmblem [2010-08-11 01:23:44 +0000 UTC]
Hey, kudos for writing a well thought out enjoyable story! Seems few and far between these days on this site... well done!
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petit-squeak In reply to SamusEmblem [2010-08-11 01:32:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, i will try to keep up with future stories.
:3
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