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phantomflamz — I've Forgotten
Published: 2010-07-13 02:23:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 804; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 5
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Description I've forgotten,
How it feels
To be loved.

I've forgotten,
How to
Laugh.

I've forgotten,
That there's
A thing called joy.

All I remember
Is your backside
Walking away.

Is breaking up
Always like this?
Will I never get back my soul?

I've forgotten
Everything that
Mattered.

Everything but you.
You are still
In my memory.

You are there
In my memory.
Reminding me.

Of everything I had lost.
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Comments: 23

Lady-Marjulie [2010-07-16 15:14:54 +0000 UTC]

I can relate to this. Lovely poem.

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phantomflamz In reply to Lady-Marjulie [2010-07-16 15:21:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you .

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unknown-loner [2010-07-14 14:41:02 +0000 UTC]

really good!!

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phantomflamz In reply to unknown-loner [2010-07-14 14:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you .

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i-lie [2010-07-14 05:21:37 +0000 UTC]

*

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i-lie [2010-07-14 05:20:36 +0000 UTC]

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I like how simple it is. I've been reading lots of symbolic and vague poems lately so this is very refreshing! It's bare and honest.

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phantomflamz In reply to i-lie [2010-07-14 11:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you .

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kacilyn17 [2010-07-14 04:48:23 +0000 UTC]

i like it! it's sad, but it's so true! i hope it's not about you... that's so sad!

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phantomflamz In reply to kacilyn17 [2010-07-14 11:52:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you , it's not about me, I'm quite happy .

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kacilyn17 In reply to phantomflamz [2010-07-14 21:09:50 +0000 UTC]

good to know you're still well and happy! beautiful, though...

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phantomflamz In reply to kacilyn17 [2010-07-14 21:11:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you .

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Chaotic-Whispers [2010-07-13 23:55:50 +0000 UTC]



Hey.
I really like this.
My favourite part was "I've forgotten everything that mattered. Everything but you."

Those lines really hit close to home. It brings up memories of the past for me. And although those lines, that are so simply written, have very slight effect on the average reader, they have really stood out to me. It sums up everything about a bad breakup, in so few short (yet brilliant) words.

Thanks for the submission (:

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phantomflamz In reply to Chaotic-Whispers [2010-07-14 00:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you , I'm sorry you had a bad memory .

No problem .

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Chaotic-Whispers In reply to phantomflamz [2010-07-14 00:13:53 +0000 UTC]

<3

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clippys [2010-07-13 10:41:19 +0000 UTC]

I like this one

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phantomflamz In reply to clippys [2010-07-13 12:32:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you .

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alstarryn [2010-07-13 02:35:44 +0000 UTC]

I know I've felt like that before. These words make me feel for the narrator.

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phantomflamz In reply to alstarryn [2010-07-13 02:36:41 +0000 UTC]

Sorry you felt like that before.

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alstarryn In reply to phantomflamz [2010-07-13 02:42:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, hon, but it was a while ago. If it reassures you, I have a great guy that won't let it happen to me ever again.

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phantomflamz In reply to alstarryn [2010-07-13 12:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks great to hear. Hope you guys are happy .

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alstarryn In reply to phantomflamz [2010-07-13 13:09:52 +0000 UTC]

Very happy, thanks!

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phantomflamz In reply to alstarryn [2010-07-13 13:10:36 +0000 UTC]

That's good, wish you the best .

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alstarryn In reply to phantomflamz [2010-07-13 13:19:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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