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Phioai — Muscles (a mini comic)
Published: 2019-02-03 07:06:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 613; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 1
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adapted from thiswww.youtube.com/watch?v=RoCpri…
and credits to Kleoite for this idea oof
i lowkey feel regret uploading this
hope u like this ^^ / found this funny
CH: Kazai, Ocean, Baris, Mio
Owned by: Baris Kleoite Mio takoyanii Kazai n Ocean are mine owo
CS: Furomimi
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Comments: 13
I want to say, muscle embarrased people are cute and sexy!
Great work!
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Oof thx!! Glad u like it <3
In all honesty I don't rly like this work since I feel it doesn't flow tht well if I've got any criticism do tell ^^
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Well, I'm not really that good at criticizing other people's draws by myself ( I truly notice these things only when I discuss with my brother about a draw ). But I'll try.
What's the black thing at the 3rd, 4th and 5th panel? And is that normal that his shoulders get red as well when he's embarrassed?
One more thing: on the 4th panel, his neck is a bit off to the right ( I mzan to his left ).
I hope it help!
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Oh and the shoulders thing I've seen it in mangas before n thought it looked cute so I was just trying it ^^
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Oh the black thing's his tattoo he has a fire tattoo there I was just lazy drawing it XD it's basically the black version of the flame I drew in his ref.
And I never noticed tht when drawing the 4th panel I'll take note of it next time thx!
Thx for the help this helps me alot ^^
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dgahdhhaSHSHGDA YOU REALLY DID IT!
Baris: those are some nice muscles meng *attempts to touchie*
Kazai: ò/////ó *slaps away the hand*
Baris: :0
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Ocean:
Kazai:
n tht's basically the whole comic yep
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