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Just-a-kiddo [2018-11-07 11:44:52 +0000 UTC]

  Hello there! I'm from ProjectComment !! I would like to give an honest review in your drawing. I still am an amateur, young artist, so I'm not really someone who can give you professional tips to improve your style. But I'll try my best to pinpoint the factors you need to improve in your work.

 Anatomy
• The fingers seem a little bit wonky
• The position with the legs looks a bit off and stiff
• Her eyes are too big (this may be a stylistic choice, but it may still be improved)
• Her facial expression is somewhat confusing (Is she suppose to be happy? Or sad?)

      Tips to improve: Use a reference, watch videos on how to improve anatomy and always try different poses and styles. Try drawing different facial expressions.

 Hair/Details/Clothes/Background
• The hair needs more detail in it.
• The hair seems blocky and not free.
• Wrinkles on the clothes should be added.
• The background is quite lacking.
• The clothes seem a little plain (I understand this might be your character's style of clothing, but it would be great if there's more design or detail to it.

      Tips to improve: Try adding more details in your drawings. Watch informative videos about adding details to hair and clothes. Try drawing a simple background. Try sketching clothing styles and experiment what will best suit your character.

 Coloring/Shading
• The piece needs more shading and highlight to it.

      Tips to improve: Try different types of shading styles and find what best suits you. 


 I hope this review helps you in improving your style! Again, I'm not a pro when it comes to this, but I do really wish that this may help you somehow. Just enjoy doing your thing and keep on drawing!!    

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twotailstm [2018-10-31 23:27:26 +0000 UTC]

looks great! though may I suggest blurring the shade under the neck a little?

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LucidsAndDreams [2018-10-31 22:18:31 +0000 UTC]

Critism:

•Hello! This is just my opinion and suggestion to your artwork. I hope it helps. I'm not an expert myself.

For the hair: Try to add some depth to the hair like adding shading and lighting to make it more realistic. Also try to add some hair strands.

For the clothes: Try to add some more details to the clothes like wrinkles. (Also shading and lighting).

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TanningTatum [2018-10-31 01:35:09 +0000 UTC]

Criticism : Try adding lights in the hair, if you already do and just didn't in the picture I am sorry, to make it a little more realistic but sometimes I don't do it so if you don't I blame you.



This is better than I could do keep it up

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