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Published: 2011-01-03 22:20:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 537; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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The girl would be sweet, nice, gentle, and kind.I'd be faithful to her, and she to me.
She would never be scared to speak her mind
We'd love each other, anyone could see.
Her eyes would tell me all I need to know.
Her hands would be soft, so she could hold mine
Together, her and I would learn to grow.
She'd be to me like a tree to a vine.
We could talk all day long, and through the night,
About everything, or nothing at all.
She would be funny, and laugh, smiling bright.
Also aware, to catch me should I fall.
When with this girl, I would never be stern,
I'd love this girl. These feelings she'd return.
Comments: 15
wickedimpulse [2011-01-17 15:47:14 +0000 UTC]
I have trouble writing in meter so the fact that you can do it means kudos for you! ^_^
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phoenixcharm In reply to wickedimpulse [2011-01-17 20:21:56 +0000 UTC]
haha it actually took me a while to do it, but it was a class assignment so I had to. xD
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wickedimpulse In reply to phoenixcharm [2011-01-17 20:40:55 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome, hun! XD
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Hoshi-Eclipse [2011-01-16 23:02:21 +0000 UTC]
That is beautiful, so simple yet so much feeling. Lovely job dear~
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phoenixcharm In reply to Hoshi-Eclipse [2011-01-17 02:38:44 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much angel.
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Hoshi-Eclipse In reply to phoenixcharm [2011-01-17 04:15:03 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome sweetie~
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phoenixcharm In reply to vividgrim [2011-01-17 02:38:30 +0000 UTC]
she sounds so lovely...now to find such a being...xD
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