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Published: 2019-08-20 12:13:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 13886; Favourites: 118; Downloads: 53
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18 presses her mount position but 21 curls up and wraps her strong legs around the Blonde's waist. During the confusion 18 manages to drive home a handful of ground and pound shots to the Brunette's money maker.Before long, the Blonde is tied up in the Brunette's web. 18's strikes no longer find a home but instead her left cheek redden's as the Brunette drives repetitive soft rights jabs. The Blonde pins down her opponents arm bring the moment to a brief stalemate.
Once again, 18 finds herself in a defensive position where it should be opposite.
Piccolo: I though 18 was tenacious but 21 gives that word new meaning.
Vegeta: 21's refusal to give is extraordinary.
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The brunette may be on her back but it's the blonde that is in trouble.
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Better watch out with this one.
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For clarification, what is the brunette's money maker?
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lol, just a couple of shots to the Brunettes sculpted facial features.
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They're gonna try. I assume they can be...?
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hahaha nice. however 18 won't appreciate it much.
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I dont think 18 got sloppy, just out played.
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Hmmmm she better sharpen up then.
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She found a rythm.
Tbh, sometimes I feel the descriptions dont reflect what I was planning while posing the images. It's like I had a good idea of what I wanted to write then forgot by the time I post it. Can be frustrating.
You ever experience something like that in your stories?
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Actually, my biggest problem is that I sometimes write as though people can see what's in my head. Like I thought it and pictured it, but never got the full picture into the text. Then I reread it later and realize it doesn't say all it needs to.
To me, it's the difference between being a color commentator for a televised sporting event and being a radio announcer. My writing sometimes comes out like I'm adding to what people can already see, when I really need to describe everything in detail so the reader can create the image for themselves.
It's annoying... especially when I only discover I did it after I've read 3 or 4 more chapters. Much harder to go back and change things then.
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ha perfect analogy. So far from what I've rad of your work I haven't seen anything pop out as a confusing description. Doing good so far.
I often write repetitive descriptions but worded differently that I need to correct or use past and present tense in the same paragraph.
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