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Published: 2011-08-11 00:31:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 584; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 8
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There's stars in the skyShining bright.
Way up high
In different shades of delight.
Their rays of light
Sparkle upon the sea.
They dance close and tight
In a midnight fantasy.
These stars go beyong the sea
And high above the clouds
Where the angels live carefree
Above the danger of mortal crowds.
AngelsΒ Β made by God
Are the stars we see.
Their bright lights beam
Upon earthly, shadowed places
And lead the way back up to Heaven.
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Comments: 11
BlueGriffin2301 [2011-08-12 04:07:29 +0000 UTC]
Might want to correct your grammar a bit: "Angels iog God" on the last paragraph first sentence. Besides that this is a wonderful thing you have made to show to the DA world
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PhoenixoftheOpera In reply to BlueGriffin2301 [2011-08-14 02:50:29 +0000 UTC]
oh snap I didn't notice that. probably from me typing so fast lol thanks
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BlueGriffin2301 In reply to PhoenixoftheOpera [2011-08-15 22:11:18 +0000 UTC]
LOL that's okay and your welcome
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violetasilvestre2011 [2011-08-11 20:42:45 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh,itΒ΄s beautifull,nature and brilliant!!The poem IS for the image!Fascinant!
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StevenForeman [2011-08-11 03:28:49 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful work!
I don't meet many rhyming poets anymore
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PhoenixoftheOpera In reply to StevenForeman [2011-08-11 03:31:53 +0000 UTC]
I do alot of different things. I rhyme, do free verse, haikus, couplets lol whatever I'm in the mood for really. But thank you all the same
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PhoenixoftheOpera In reply to HPAmortentiaLove [2011-08-11 03:32:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
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